ScreamingQueen2006

Great one shot Jen. You capture the characters of Aden and Belle so perfectly. Well done on the contest as well.

Great chapter. You write comedy so well, you're my favourite fanfic writer of comedy. Update again soon.

Awesome revelations. Brax getting the door slammed in his face was another good part of the chapter. Looking forward to the next update.

Great chapter. Oh no, that news is just so sad. I hope Casey can recover from this somehow. It's really going to affect him. I just hope he doesn't push Ruby away or anything because that would be even sadder. Look forward to the next chapter.

Great chapter. Typical of Nicole to tell Roman not to call her when she's out with friends. Interesting that they all have their own secret. Maybe when all three knows about the kids they'll relate more because it's something they have in common. Also love the name Marissa. It's the same name as a character I'm writing for my first book. So when I saw it I thought. "Marissa? So awesome." Hehe. Update soon Kristen. Looking forward to more.

Maybe one of them could have a secret child. Possibly the result of a teenage relationship. They either put the child up for adoption or the child lives with someone in their families, but they've kept it quiet for fear of being ridiculed. You could have the girl who's got the secret confide in one of the others, who she thinks she can trust. Then either it's talked about in the diner and Colleen or Ruby or whoever over hears. Or you could have a confession on the phone and for someone the girl thinks she's telling her friend, but really she's telling Sid or Miles or something. That's the only idea I have off the top of my head at the moment. Hope I helped.

Great start. I love the banner by the way. Look forward to more and reading what happens to the girls friendship.

Sweet chapter. I like how Darcy woke up and sprung Charlie and Brax kissing. Update again soon.

Perhaps you could have one of the girls be the bigger person and say something along the lines of. "I've been thinking,is it worth ruining our friendship over something as juvenille/silly as a guy?" and you could also have her mention that she misses her friend. (That's if they're friends). You could have one of them just out right apologise, when they realise they were wrong for going so over the top fighting about the guy in question. "I'm sorry about going off at you about Cameron." Then they chill out in the diner with a milkshake, and it's just like old times before the fight. That's my suggestions for you. I hoped I helped.

I'm really enjoying reading this, very funny as well. I like the banter between Dex and Sasha. Dexter going on about how lovely his burger tasted was priceless. Sasha losing her phone. Dex and April naming themselves Dex3PO and AprilD2 on msn. More soon please.

Wonder how things go next between Xavier and Brax. I fear more tension is on the horizon. Update soon.

Hey Kristen, great two chapters. I hope Casey will be ok. Look forward to more.

Great start, and it's nice to see Belle and Jai. Look forward to the next chapter.

I wrote to Demi and Lincoln a quite a few months back and haven't heard anything from either of them. Think I might write again. Anyway, I recently purchased some fancards of former H&A cast on ebay. I noticed one is bigger than the other and also has thicker card, and the other feels more filmsy. Does anyone know how to tell between a fake and real fancard?

Well I thought Playschool would never start, but finally I have some free time to read this awesome fic. Firstly, I like how you referenced to the past, with Martha and Hugo on the run and the people smuggling. Brought back 2009 all over again. Alf now has a carbon copy of himself but a female version, Daisy. I'm glad him and John are better in the end. I loved this. “How did……oh never mind, hey where’s Romeo?” Ruby asks. “Over there its good job he floats like a block of wood isn’t it?” Lottie says pointing to Romeo who had already bobbed his way upon the sandy shores of the beach. Made me laugh. I have really liked this. And like all good things they come to an end, but I look forward to your future stories.

I missed a few of your updates but I'm all caught up now. Great chapters and funny writing as always.

Another good chapter. Wonder if Romeo will be lost outside in the garden jungle forever. Update soon.

Fantastic chapter. Ruby being scared and trapped out in the huge jungle garden was funny. Rescued by Cameron Welsh, but oh my, I can't believe what happened to him. Quicksand death! I'm holding out for it to just be one of those creepy fair jokes or something. Poor Xave. I just want to hug him and say. "Don't worry Xavey. Ruby will be ok." Hehe Please don't let anything bad happen to those two, haha. Update soon please.

Aww such a lovely message she wrote. Nice scans Jamie.

Congrats on your reply from Kate Ritchie, and what a nice surprise. Look forward to seeing the pics.

A potential April/Casey pairing maybe happening here? I would ship them, they'd make a nice couple. Great chapter once again. Update soon.

Ruby screaming because of Harvey being in her wardrobe was funny . Like Alf and Daises game too. Looking forward to more. Update soon.

Blue Lagoon: The Awakening

Apologies for the lack of updates. I will get the next part posted soon.

Fantastic writing. You capured the relationship between them wonderfully. I can imagine them saying all the things they said in this fic. Look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.