ScreamingQueen2006

Nice chapter. It's good that everyone was ok with Ruby after her mood. Wonder what's going on with little Haydn. Update soon.

Great writing as always. Romeo delivering pizzas is so apt. Update soon.

Nice chapter Haha drunk Xave and Ruby asking everyone to leave. Update soon.

Awesome finishing chapter to this story. Like VJ's reply to Dex asking if he wants more tutoring. "No thanks. I know where that leads and I don't really want another brother." Classic.

Just to let you guys know I haven't forgotten about this story. There will be a new update soon so stay tuned.

Was sunny earlier now it's getting dark, but it's still nice and mild here.

The Notebook

Awesome chapter. Hehe Dex 'The War Lord of Chess', taking on Lottie. Plus Indi putting Romeo's surf board for sale on ebay. Can't wait till the next update.

Awesome chapter. Funny parts for me were Casey going surfing in a lake. Does this lake really have waves big enough to go surfing? The banter between April and Casey and I like how everyone is so in-character. April wanting organic sausages and free range eggs. Look forward to your next update.

Hey Steve. Sorry for not commenting on your previous chapters, I got caught up in the early years lol. Fantastic updates, i love the way you write the characters. You're an awesome comedy writer. Look forward to more.

Awesome update. Love the banter between everyone and it's so scary at times. If Dex had been back in Summer Bay I would have thought he'd been watching too much Amytiville Horror haha.

Well done on your sucesses. That's great news.

Aww Dex He's such a sweetie, he's been so good with Leah and going to the supermarket for her. Woah at the end there with what he asked Xavier. Update soon.

This is so awesome. The gang finally arrived at the Haunted Mansion and how creepy it was too, the part of the woman Dexter saw and how noone believes him. April too busy texting Bianca, and Xavier's comment that he'd need to go the gym more to use the knocker on the door. John on finding it funny about the show and he thinks Xavier will be the first out. He doesn't have much faith does he? You write humour so well. You even added Cameron Welsh into this Fab chapter, can't wait for more, hopefully soon.

I second she's on the rebound. Logan is everything she wanted Romeo to be. Let's face it Indi has lived quite a priviledged life with a dad for a doctor and a history of family going to university, and a nice stable environment to grow up in. Romeo hasn't had that kind of life and he seems a bit all over the place in terms of what he wants to do career wise. Logan on the hand has been born with a silver spoon in his mouth, very upper class and proper and wealthy with which he can shower and woo Indi with gifts. In a way I think he's kind of bought her, or thinks she'll stay interested with everything he's buying her. Indi has this superficial trait, which i don't think even she's really been aware of until now. The whole thing with the dress and Logan's sister telling Indi that Logan would be more than willing to pay for it. She really jumped in head first with this but I guess most rebounds are like that. Rebounds don't last either, so it's anyone's guess what will happen, but the ending doesn't look pretty.

Thanks for the comments Jarlie, Pembie, Beezzz, Red Ranger and Aden_Belle. I'm working on the next one, and it should be up soon hopefully.

Alot of secrets uncovered in that chapter. Look forward to where you take them. Update soon Zetti

Liking the build up, can't wait to see what happens to them in the haunted house. Update soon

Great chapter. You write Dex so well. Update soon.

Poor Alf and John. Typical Colleen was funny her talking about coffee instead of being worried about the pressing matter of Alf's heart attack. Liked the scene with Ruby, Xavier and Dex. Awesome ending once again. Wonder if Xave will try out the competition. Someone's got to try and win the money. Look forward to more

Liked the part of Gina not being able to get to sleep because of John's channel bashing. Dex trying to do an Alf impersonation was funny too. Awesome, but shocking ending. Wonder what will happen now. Update soon, as i'm really looking forward to reading this one.

Oh my gosh Fantastc ending, just suprised this is how Lucy's life may end. Hope her baby will be ok. Update soon please

I have only ever got 3 replies so far have written to a few but I have met lots of the cast from Paul, John, Chris, Ada, Steve, both Links, Esther, Lyn, Samara and can't think who else. Still hope for some letters. I'm sure you'll hear something from them sooner or later. Sometimes they're just really busy and have a ton of fanmail to get through. It once took me writing to Rebecca Breeds twice, after a year of not hearing anything i wrote a second time and that took a few months.

Wow at Bianca, she's really seeing ths through. Like the way you write the relationships Zetti. Great update. More soon please.