ScreamingQueen2006

Good chapter. Update again soon.

Can't stand Romeo. He's with Indi and Ruby's with Casey, he needs to accept that and move on. Look forward to more.

You had me laughing all the way through that. I liked the older cast running about the kitchen, Colleen making mud cake and just all the banter. I could imagine a lot of what was said them saying the exact same in the show. Geoff and Aden were funny, and oh my at Belle and Jai, naughty naughty. Hehe Loved how everyone made a mad dash to get out, and Indi bashing Liam's beloved guitar to get through the doors. But I must say what really did make me sad was Roland. That was depressing him not making it out alive. Oh well. R.I.P Roland the rat. Well done on such a fantastic story. Thanks for sharing Steve. Look forward to your future stories.

Great chapter. I find it amusing and kinda apt that Ruby works at a place called Sexy Tales. It's like an Ann Summers a la Summer Bay. Such a shocker at the end there. Looking forward to the potential fallout of it all. Update again soon.

Great chapter. Some wise words there from Brax to Casey. Update again soon.

Great chapter. Loved the scene between Romeo and Indi. They seem to have racked a few people up between them and since they've been together too. Typical soap land rule - 'All is forgiven as long as I get revenge.' I hope Ruby has her eyes wide open. Update again soon.

Great chapter here Zetti. Feel sorry for Casey as he's trying to make amends. Just hope in time that he gets through to Heath. Update again soon.

I liked the conversation between Billy and Ruby, and at the end there because I can't fathom why Indi would want Romeo to kiss Ruby. I look forward to the next update.

Hopefully Dex finally gets the rat back and the Belle and Jai moment was a nice touch. Look forward to the final chapter.

Oh gosh Ruby punching Casey and Romeo and Nicole getting along. Look forward to the next update.

Good chapter. Update again soon.

The ending has left me wondering what will happen next. Update again soon.

Great chapter. Loved April's desperate need to clean Dexter's room. Jai and Belle are a nice pairing in this, like all their scenes. Oh my at the end. I hope Roland isn't lost forever. Update again soon.

Loved Darcy saying to Brax that he'd put holes in the floor with his pacing around. She's the cutest. Update again soon.

Great chapter.Dexter and his Italian princess was priceless and oh my, Indi having to flirt with the customers. Update again soon.

Great one shot Tele. Very emotive and gripping and above all very well written. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

I have a feeling Romeo will keep pushing till Ruby succumbs to him, maybe. Update again soon.

Awesome chapter. Alf and Miles being chased by Belle and Jai made me laugh. I wonder if Belle will get her story with Jai's not so good driving skills. I need more comedy and laughs in my life so please update again soon.

OMG The ending has me wanting to know what happens next. Please update soon.

This I have got to see. It would be nice if Romeo came good for little Avey. I loved the ending, she's such a cutie. Update soon Kristen.

Great chapter. The part with Belle and Jai was awesome. Update again soon.

Romeo is such a douchebag, not telling a current girlfriend he has a kid. He shouldn't lie or keep it a secret. Hope he doesn't cause trouble for Nicole. Good chapter as always. Look forward to the next one.

Wow Heath didn't know he had a kid because Indi put her up for adoption. I can see what she's saying though, and someone like Heath probably wouldn't have been in the proper head space for deciding on the options. Good chapter. Look forward to more soon.

Great chapter. Hmm wonder what Romeo's intentions are. Look forward to reading the next update.

Glad Casey's ok. Update again soon Kristen.