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Thank goodness Grant is dead. I hope Charlie will be okay. Another good chapter, well done. Carina xxx

I liked that story, Laura. It was really well written and I loved the emotions you used in it. Very well written, well done. Carina xxx

After talking to you earlier .... I'm disappointed that you're not writing the sequel ... you said you were going to and that comment was for before you said there wasn't a sequel ... but I'm disappointed because I thought the ending would have been better ... more wrapped up in a way ... and it seemed that there were too many questions left to answer ... and not fully ended in a way ...

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Let's face it ... the Adelle pregnancy made that ending, right people? No? On my own then ... Brilliant, Zetti. I loved how you ended it. Not everything was quite perfect with Angelo and Nicole being divorced, etc. But a great ending. Really beautifully written and of course, an absolute pleasure to read so really well done. Carina xxx

Another amazing chapter! Really well written. The character interaction was brilliant. Carina xxx

I only said chapter 'cause it's still a chapter to me ... the first chapter ... just not chapter one ... it makes sense in my little mind, honest. Another good update though << See, I'm too scared to say chapter now ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Er ... woah ... amazing though ... really ... wow ... I am literally speechless (and I ALWAYS have something to say) sl this isn't good ... <Zetti prays that I remain speechless for life> Although then I'd be boring and not so fun ... and that'd be worse ... Another amazing chapter. Not long to go now Oh. Update soon! Carina xxx

A nice chapter there ... loved the interaction, brilliantly written as always. Well done and I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Once again, Red, a pleasure to read ... beautifully portrayed emotions ... I look forward to more and seeing where this goes next too. Well done. Great as always. Carina xxx

A great start and first chapter ... looking forward to more. Carina xxx

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I enjoyed that chapter ... I loved the structure of writing in that update. Really well written, well done. Carina xxx

Another great chapter ... amazing characterisation and interaction between everyone. Really well done. Carina xxx

I did read this the other day but have only just got the chance to comment ... THANK YOU! I had NO idea, by the way, that you were bringing back Belle ... or at least mention that she's alive! Eeeek! This is friggin' amazing! I loved that update and look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

An advantage of being up at six this morning ... getting to read this! Yay. I feel so sorry for Sophie, awkward! Saying that, I don't know who actually seemed to feel more awkward ... Another brilliant chapter though, Tele. As always, really well done and I really look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Really amazing chapter, Jen. I did start reading this last night but didn't get a chance to read it all and comment. But as always, amazing character portrayal. Really well done. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

I loved the emotion and interaction between everyone in that update and I really look forward to more. I'm concerned about the preview though ... hmm ... update soon. Carina xxx

Oooh the ending ... looking forward to seeing were you take this as well ... loved the emotion in that chapter too. Really amazing, well done. Carina xxx

I haven't commented on this yet ... ? Seriously ... what? Amazing! The ending was shocking though! But it makes me want to read more. I look forward to the next update. Carina xxx

That was anaother great update, I really enjoyed it. I loved the portrayal of characters and just everything to be honest. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Another great chapter with amazing character interaction. Really well written. Well done. Carina xxx

I thought I had read and commented on this last night ... obviously not ... Needless to say, another fantastic chapter. Really well done. Loved Ruby in that chapter ... Looking forward to more. Carina xxx

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