HighwayUnicorn

That was another fantastic chapter. I absolutely adore Brax in this fic! Absolutely amazing, so fantastic. Really well done. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Aww, I loved Brax in that chapter. So sweet to read. Well written, very well done. Carina xxx

I'm liking this fic so far. Interesting chapters and I look forward to more and seeing where you take this. Well written so far, well done. Carina xxx

Okay so that is very confusing but interesting. I look forward to more and seeing where it goes next. Carina xxx

Because I didn't just open uo all the tabs and arrange it as to how I commented ... best til last ... absolutely not ... I absolutely adore the children in this story, Tele. Well, any story they're included in but you know what I mean ... I'm just going to shut up in case we don't get another update. Brilliantly written once again. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Another brilliant chapter. Poor Ruby though. Bless her. But it was funny I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I loved Ruby calling Charlie 'mum' and I love that Brax seems supportive too. The preview sounds good. I look forward to more. Well written once again, well done. Love Carina xxx

Fair point ... Sorry everyone ...

Ban me all you like, Tele, you know it never works. Because one way around that is reading but not commenting ... but I usually comment days after you've posted so that probably won't make a major difference. Oh well ... drama it is then ... on the condition you make everything better afterwards ...

No, I'm not talking to myself ... I was having an imaginary conversation with you ... And you did say to me that you'd keep everyone safe ... And in answer to ... well, yeah ... please? If you don't mind of course.

Another great chapter, Red. Loved the interaction between Nicole and Matilda. Brilliant as always, well done. Love Carina xxx

Of course, Tele, as per usual ... amazing! Rola As always. Fantastically written. And you'll keep everyone safe, yes? Don't hurt anyone? ... Thank you Glad to hear it I look forward to more. Another amazing chapter. Well done. Love Carina xxx

You've brought Belle into it ... sort of ... Brax! Oh dear ... I quite like the idea of him being her dealer though ... That was so brilliantly written and I absolutely love the way you bring everyone into this story and make them have a part. It's fantastic and I absolutely adore your writing. Really amazing, well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Missed a few updates, sorry. I loved them though! I adore Bianca and Charlie's relationship with each other ... they are such good friends to each other. And Heath as well, at least he's helping out too. Brilliantly written and I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Ruby and Casey in that chapter Another brilliant chapter. Really well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Oh dear ... and now they both now about each other. I hope Charlie does go to meet him. Brilliantly written. Well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I think it works well as a one shot. You wrote it brilliantly. Absolutely beautiful and fantastically portrayed emotions, well done. Love Carina xxx

I am so sorry, Red! You advertised this fic and I had intended to read it but I haven't been online because I've been ill. But I'm here now, although still unwell ... but at least now I can comment. I am loving this fic so far. The first chapter was really interesting and definitely had me thinking loads of things. Once again, throughout, I am loving the character interaction and portrayal. Absolutely brilliantly written and I really look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Another great chapter ... I must admit, Nicole is acting quite mature right now. At least that's something ... but I still don't like her for coming between Charlie and Angelo in the first place. Brilliantly written, really well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I really dislike Martha ... but at least Charlie and her managed to talk to each other and sort things out. Another great chapter there, brilliantly written. Really well done. Love Carina xxx

Yes, you had better go into hiding ... you killed Aden? And Belle? <Unfriends from facebook> Luckily for you, I am not that cruel But you did write that so well. In a way, their deaths were portrayed beautifully, generally because it was so emotional. And you did a fantastic job of writing it so well done and congratulations. Love Carina xxx

That was another great chapter, Danni. Really amazingly well written. Really well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Another brilliant update, Tele. And I would have commented earlier but I haven't been online on BttB all day ... And I have sort of been sulking and jealous of everyone who saw the Arctic Monkeys last night so have stayed in my pj's all day (lazy, I know) and watched highlights. But I'm here now to comment ... so I'll get on with it ... Only wanting the argument if they can have make up sex afterwards ... makes a lot of sense. And I'm pretty sure Alexi is going to cause a lot of trouble for them now too. Great < That's sarcasm by the way so please make sure nothing happens to Ella, Roman, the kids ... And once again, just Rola I loved that update and I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I read this last night but didn't comment, sorry. That was another brilliant chapter. So fantastically written. You always add so much humour into your stories. Well done. I loved that update. Love Carina xxx

I liked Charlie and Brax at the start. That was brilliant. I must admit, I don't agree with what Nicole and Angelo did to Charlie but Nicole does seem to be reasonable and understanding, not wanting Charlie to abort the baby. I don't particularly like her very much in this story but it's made me gain a bit of respect for her. I feel sorry for both Casey and Ruby there. Casey doesn' know the full story so is bound to jump to conclusions. Yet Ruby still doesn't want to talk about her dad which is only fair. It'll take time to trust Casey enough to tell him something like that. I enjoyed that chapter. Really well done. Love Carina xxx