baby gurl

iloved that chapter..one of my favourite fics... pls update soon...

i totally agree with it all...your so right.... how could you do that?

lol, sian wen r u goin 2 update ur fics...?

lol....happy that callie's been found.... i loved the bit bout red heads..lmao... can't u kill rachel off and let kim and kit b 2gether? pls update soon...gr8 chapter by the way

aaaaaaaawww the poems lovely.... u make wanna cry with this fic... please update soon!!!

gr8 chapter...robbie,jack n kim r sooooo funny....{james bond} lmao!!! pls update sooooooon....

can't belive you killed of jack.... aaawww olivia's so cute.... i loved it when she was talking to the tomb stone... please update....

i can't believe callie's gone missing....noooooooo!!! it was a great update....i loved the whole rachel/kim thing..

omg..that was a great chapter...can't believe there's only 1 chapter left...

yayy...luc and maddie are getting married...

wows it really good...where is martha? im confused. lol..

its gr8..jacks a perfect gentle men..lol...

glad jack n martha are back together... kiha..such a nice name..lol

i love it...i feel so sorry 4 jack.. but at least him and martha can be good friends..

i loved the whole fic...lol. you ended it so sweetly! i'm definatly going to miss this fic...but i guess it had to end some time. can't wait for your other fics.

its gr8. its soo sad...pls carry on soon...

i loved the wedding! can't believe there's only one chapter left what will tour next chapter be on?

omg! when u sed that jack takes out his anger on someone i thought it would be eamon, not luc and tony...lol. pls carry on.

I think they were the equivelant of ******** but I'm not sure, great chapter, update soon, poor Martha Yeah sorry i thought i'd be a bit different... don't worry next chapter will be longer...

its gr8!!! i love martha's brothers' warnings 2 jack on the night b4 their wedding...so funny...lmao!!!

b4 i start the next bit RIFTON LAKE is a made up place, coz i couldn't think of n e places in the bay.. Any way here it is.... Jack's face dropped. "Martha McKenzie?" Jack asked again making sure he heard right. "No, Jack, Kate Moss," McGareth replied sarcasticly. "Look you get down to Rifton Lake to take her statement, and when we have another officer free then i'll send them down." "Yes boss" Jack replied. He then took his keys from the desk and ran out the station. %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% sorry its short...but there will be more asap...

no, martha ran out coz she remembered her ex... then l8er on in the evening she got raped... sorry i'm nt a gd explainer...hope that helped a little....