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So Paul ended up going to jail too even with Joanne’s recorded confession rotten luck but at least he and Frankie got married on the outside I wonder that sometimes when do characters find time for sex within their busy dramatic lives I guess even a case of deadly poison can’t stop one’s needs when feeling horny let’s hope Shane and Sharon can cope with a big family if they do go into frostering as pippa suggested it might get bigger still Good story are you writing anymore

Clever I didn’t realise there was a listening device either when reading that sometime it can seem obvious but Sharon choose the right questions to get Joanne talking my therory with it being about Angel was right though and it was revenge there that got Shane poisoned Looks like the game is up for Joanne now though unless Terri has a nasty accident of course

Look forward too your next story then

Let’s see if you can make me feel sorry for Ziggy worse character ever lol

Question is though did Dean pay for the drinks or were they freebies haha It didn’t take Bree a lot to open up not even a offer of pizza but I guess if it’s one person you want in your corner it’s Dean he has the river boys on stand by I’m guessing Jacob will not be expecting them if he was going to cause trouble Nice writing just shame it’s a one shot Oh yes also I could see Ziggy being abit jealous of Dean and Brees friendship

It’s probably a good job you did introduce a suspect because I was entering into super Sherlock Homles mode there for a minute you had to throw me off the scent somehow As long as it doesn’t turn out to be Darth Vader it could do after all this Star Wars chat both stories get combined

So Selina got away safely in the end then So it looks like it goes back to Angel for some reason to attack Shane and not Sharon if Joanne went for Sharon she could have claimed her Sharon’s story without her ever finding out So her movite has to go back to thinking Angel was her friend Writers can be abit crazy according to Stephen King novels anyway I expect your one of the normal writers of the world though Red? Haha Thanks I now know where to start with Star Wars What do you think of new movies?

What I can gather from YouTube people say start with the Thawne stories and the old stuff that they wrote for the books is called legends and ended in 2012 Are you posting a chapter today

So maybe I’m wrong about Selina she seems innocent enough now thinking of joining the navy as a nurse or are you going to make people think Selina has left to go be a nurse but really kill her off Covers the suspect’s tracks if she is a victim the plot thickens When Sally returned there I thought straight away hmmm are you going to have something nasty happen to a legendary character? Oh and Star Wars I think I want what was cannon before Disney took over because of what I heard they cancelled all that and now say their stuff is the cannon so is that the new Eu?

Yeah sorry hope you didn’t mind the unexpected comment thanks for your help I check them out Now your story All three of the girls could have a movite Mandy wanting her novel to become alive before turning it into a best seller twisted as that is but the quote about it being all about the writing has me wondering is that a play on words? Frankie maybe it has something to do with feeling forced back into Shane’s life because of Angel and she’s blaming her so wants revenge and the only way to get to Angel is through Shane wild theory probably Selina jealousy of what Shane and Sharon have and she said she doesn’t think her life is going the way it’s supposed too Or maybe Shane just picked a berry or mushroom while working outside haha Have too see if the suspect tries anything else? Maybe you don’t like me trying too guess the outcome of your story

I wanted to ask you Red because I thought you might know you like Star Wars right? Have you read any of the EU books? Where is a good place to start with those? I read your chapter tonight before I go to bed

I prefer horror over lovey dovey any day of the week so not complaining

Mmm awake until someone spikes his Iv drip at least that will come sometime I’m sure poison they say is a woman’s choice of weapon so Mandy or Frankie even though I’m not sure why she would want to frame Paul for it Maybe it’s it’s Sharon that would be a twist Oh hang on Mandy is a writer isn’t she? Maybe she is living out her next plot idea for her book live action style I wasn’t expecting poison or attempted murder in this story maybe a love story

Only while the Yankee White company scented candles are hidden away they are all the range these days or some lead piping gets broken off one of the showers from the shower block

It’s like a game of cluedo Mandy seems too obvious at this point but who else could it be hmm

Yes I think I was right about Mandy Sharon and Selina I will be watching them closely as the story goes on What trouble can Paul and Frankie cause in a week I’m not sure but the seems important some reason as well

One of two things could happen next Sharon could get with Mandy or Selina could get with Mandy and Sharon will become very jealous of them both Either way I don’t think Shane should be looking forward too meeting her really or I’m totally wrong and you have other plans

Sally always I thought acted older than she was on the show so it’s funny and strange also quite cool to see her surfing I don’t remember Frankie and Paul go be honest but look forward too see what they bring to the plot everyone seems a tad too happy at the moment is there going to be a masked killer out there or something sorry I watched Scream tonight so I have that in my mind It’s funny to think of Damo of having found religion I think of him as Irene’s bad boy son he was one of my favourites back in the day. It so was Shane

I’m sorry I got mixed up with the episodes I didn’t mean to spoiler it

I thought that too I’m glad Tex got caught though he is a right smug knob haha

I watched the commonwealths cliffhanger and the only thing I cared about was Tane had time to get his sling off his arm haha I didn’t really find that exciting I liked Jo the cop Dean knew from mangrove river

Different timelines and time travel haha

Since my mom died I have tried to write on and off can’t seem to come up with anything good maybe sometime it will get back on track Thought I drop you a comment or two Sharon might want to have a baby but is it one of those things that seem to be a good idea at the moment but ends up being a omen of bad things to come like their happy little life will start to crumble? Shane wondering if he has only settled for Sharon because he can’t have Angel might be a clue Good start

That whole episode made it so obvious that Theo would be the new lead singer shame I thought Keith was pretty awesome I would have hired him I’m confused though with auditions I have tried in the past have always said what type of thing they were looking for so the band advertised Wong that girl wasn’t too bad either Theo was just meh haha Ziggy was very silly though auditions are hard to get past so the chances for Theo in the real world would be slim Is Theo going to write all the songs now then a lot of peasure to put on him

They need to get him away from Rose or have them both work together on a mystery crime case Away from the silly and boring love thing that is happening now anyway