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excellent Irene yelling at a corpse and peter being evil excellent.See you introduced some of the sayings

We will just look upon it as the season finale and your next story the premiere.

Amanda gagged another example where you should be the scriptwriter on the actual soap ha ha Excellent stuff sweety

Sounds Mint!!. I really enjoyed the 2 episodes "zoe" told sally everything in flashback the first time round and how suddenly it all made sens elooking back. I love this story It is well thought out well written and has my full attension. Im looking forward to Peters confession of psychosis Rick

Main character cheered mmmmmm.... " I havent decided who will die yet" Oh im sorry detective but thats the wrong answer............game over lmao me a knuckle head lol

Your trying to confuse me so dont try and confuse a confused confusee while being the confuser , because you never know how confusing it could be to be confused back in confusing circumstances by the confusee I hate martha one of the few chracters in 19 years i havent been able to like or warm too.. I will still enjoy your story though because I just know she will die hint hint lmao

LMAO i suppose it would be iilogical too add her in now if only the actual scriptwriters could take some of that advice and kill axe sorry Not mention Martha again

The cast is becoming very limited you have already killed off many including 2 long standing characters one who served as a cast member for 19 years and one for 8

Sounds interesting got me thinking

Excellent the old fashion, famous keep your mouth shut or you know what i'll do line.

so thats DOH for the end and a WOOHOOOOO for a while off yet

Excellent looking forward to seeing Peters True Motive

No i dont act or feel my age either i act like a teenager. Peter is indeed weird his excuse is likley to be something like got up nothing on tv fancied a good laugh planted a few dodgy milkshake machines I saw it as " the milkshake" of human kindness rofl

Im 24 but you saying that makes me feel old how rude I would love to find the motive out why Peter would help someone who blew him up wicked oops back to school again lmao

Excellent good ol TT nice one Sweety excellent as always "jinx" I havent said that or heard that since i left school in 1999 lol wow

" making a meal" of things of course

Once again excellent nice to see Zoe around, i love the nursery rhyme, i used to love Zoe's notes such as " kabooomm so near yet so far peter" " bang bang your dead" and that text " how do you like my apartment" great stuff i could imagine a funny scene " Tick Tock Tick tock here is a present for you detective" Crap dont open it Peter it's from zoe " Oh sorry I didnt mean to scare anyone It's a watch it was just a joke" " Strike me flamin rich colleen keep your presents and jokes to your self"

If its half as good as this one your have me for support..........that sounds wrong you havent just lost a relative.........i will shall we say continue to appreciate your talent there da-da im a clown

It's so popular because you are both talented and very funny with it. They can also see the comparison between a great soap and a great set of films.

Look forward to it as always

Excellent sorry i took so long get back to you i had an afternoon lay down as for the last 3 weeks i cant seem to get to sleep till after 4am and up again from 6am. Im very impressed I look forward to reading the other assigment you mentioned earlier cake..........that sounds familiar sparklers gas cans ex nurses oh yes thats it and the barn "melted" lol

Excellent.... thats was nasty in the film that geezer should have supervised them instead of yapping on the phone..... and when she went black and the glass smashed *shiver*

Cant wait for either Peter useless at his job so your just adding a script from any home and away existing episode with him in then? lol

LOL!!! letting zoe run around twice sarah lewis once marc edwards evan rice ( although he was supposedly dead for that one) did he actually protect anyone anyway? Id rather trust freddy krugar to look after me than Peter hee hee

" tick tock tick tock" " booooom so near yet so far peter...." " bang bang your dead" " de'ju'vu detective" " see you at miss groper" " im next door" i know peter has gone up to mars in a space shuttle had zoes brain put in his head and is the new stalker transvestite lmao