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LMAO! I love that part! When I read it I cringed. Lol. Great Chapter! =)

Just thought I'd warn y'all that from the next chapter there will be references to Undercover Cop 1. So sorry to confuse people who haven't read it! =)

Lol! Thanks! I guess your name is the next on the hit list.. lol Apart from the last terribly rude comment about me, I agree with everything jacknmarthaluver is saying. I need answers to them questions!! lol

If Jack was here right now, I'd call him a fool. Oh My God! Does this mean he likes Rose? Does this mean he doesn't really love Martha? =( Not good. However, it was very well written! =)

Sounds great!! Fantastic Start!

! You don't believe I have an army of small people eh? Well, I guess they'll be paying you a visit.. lol

! Martha, what the hell you doing with this Warren Showden? What are you thinking!? *Slaps round head* ya fool! Lol Aww! I'm really happy you've made another fan fic! =) And really happy its a M&J one! Lol. But sadly, I'm not allowing you to leave me just with chapter one today, you have to post the next chapter soon, else I'll get my army of small people on you! Lol You've been warned!! Seriously though, it really sounds like a brilliant fic. Its so mysterious, I have so many questions, I need them answering! lol. Why did she leave Jack? He "let her go"? That's got to mean something! She still likes him! He likes her! Fools!! lol Please post the next chapter, my army of small people are on standby! lol

Hmm, no please in there... lol

Just thought I'd let you all know that I've finished writing the fic! *does dance* but you've still got around 8 days left of it! lol

Later =) lol

Thanks for the comments. I'm actually writing the last bit now! UCC2 is coming to an end.. Except the last chapter, 35, is like pages long.. lol I guess I'll have to split it up into 3 or something. lol Next chapter will be up later.

My god! That story is fantastic! Great, another fan fic that I'm going to be obsessed with.. lol

Yea! That'd be awesome! lol

Nicole: Definetly, write more! Bill: Yup! I love your fics, your so great at writing Joanne: You can't stop girlie! Clive: Please carry on! Trevor: Please write more, my lil angel. lol Dave: Write more, or else! lol Jenny: Write more about Jay-Jay! lol Callum: Write more about Martha! lol Well, it seems to me like me, my imagenary friends and my characters all say YES! That's 8 so far! =) lol

You go out Matilda!! Lol! Very good! =) I like this fan fic! lol Can I ask what happened to this? I've got a bit confused! lol Sorry! =P

Hmm, it looks to me like Lucas will take after his big brother, Constable Holden number 2 maybe? lol Well done Lukey-boy!

Well if we're in the 'thanking' mood then i'd like to thank you for producing such marvellouso fics!

OH my god that was ace! AWww brotherly love! Lol By the end of chapter 22 I was sure it was Ric. I felt really clever thinking "he he I know who it is." But i got it wrong! Lol! Well done! I hope Lucas don't die! That'd be sad. lol (obviously)

Aha! Thicko Corey! You should have planned it through you dumbass! lol Well done! That was brill! Irene's involved now! Post again soon! =)

Aww that was great and sweet and i can so imagine jack looking fit in a suit.. lol You are a really good writer, shames its over, but it was a very good end! =) Well done!

Looking forward to the next chapter! =)

Lol! You sound quite crazy.. I like you! lol Thanks for the wonderful comments! =) Chapter 26 should be up soon, probably later tonight.

Lol! You notice how the majority of them are men! Hmm! What does that say, hey? lol Great fic darling! =) Keep it going!

Wonderful. I like it! lol I love your "That Endless Summer", I'm ashamed to say that chapter 3 was the first I'd ever read, but it was fantastic! You are an amazing writer, and when my coursework is out of the way I'm going to have to catch up! lol Amazingly Brilliant! =D Very different from any fanfics I've read. Cassie as a goth! I'm loving it! lol Lucas as a nerd! lol Very VERY good! Please keep writing so I can keep...proofing..? lol *claps*

You can almost here Lucas thinking. Clunk, Clunk, Clunk. lol Omg! Julia the evil thing! Tsk! Starting to not like her now.. lol Keep it going! looking forward to next chapter!