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  1. Thanks and who knows they might break up soon
  2. Thanks and i will update in the next hour
  3. Chapter 4 (Kim and Rachel are in the kitchen fighting unaware Hugh at the door) Kim: Rach I don't want kids and we aren't having then Rachel: Well i want then Hugh: Rach deserves to be happy not just you Kim (Rachel and Kim turn and see Hugh at the door) Kim: She can still be happy without kids Hugh: But she might want kids to Kim: We don't need kids Hugh: Rachel should get a say to Kim: Choice has already been made by me Rachel : I can't take this anymore let's go for a walk (Rachel and Hugh are walking along the beach) Rachel: Thanks for defending me back there Hugh: All good but i meant what i said you should get what you want to Rachel: But Maybe Kim right and maybe i wouldn't be a good mum Hugh : You would be the best mum Rachel: Are you alright Hugh: Look I know your with Kim but i have feeling for you Rachel : Look we always going to have a tiny bit of feeling for each other Hugh: So it not just me Rachel: No Hugh: You need to be happy Rach so if your not with Kim you need to do something about that Rachel: Yeah well i want kids so i going to have to anyhow i better go get ready for work i catch up with you later (Rachel walks away and Hugh sees Martha watching Jack surf so he sits next to her) Hugh: I told Rachel i had feeling for her Martha: Does she have them back Hugh: She just thinks i have a crush because we went to uni together but i know it more then that Martha: You need to find a way to show her you love her without breaking up her marriage Hugh: Well that might happen anyway i had to stand up for Rachel in a fight with Kim this moring Martha: What were they fighting about Hugh: He told her they are never having kids (Unware to Martha and Hugh Jack have come out of the water) Jack: That sounds like world war 3 Kim not wanting kids i surprised Hugh: Why Jack: It a long story and as for you I guessing you like Rach Hugh: How did you know Jack: I heard you and Martha talk the other night Hugh: Right Jack: Go and fight for the girl you love Martha before it to late Hugh: You know what i going to do that
  4. Yeah but Hugh might just want to spend time with the person he loves As for Martha and Hugh chats i loved their friendship on screen and wanted this story to have it
  5. Chapter 3 (The next day Hugh sees Rachel at work) Hugh: Rach how long do you have left on your shift Rachel:About 5 minutes Hugh:Well how about we go and get our stuff and catch up for dinner we haven't had dinner together in a while (Rachel smiles) Rachel: Yeah that sounds good way better then being with Kim right now Hugh: I thought you told him how you felt Rachel: I did but he still doesn't want kids so i decided to stop asking even if ir hurts me Hugh: You have a right to be happy to Rachel you deserve that Rachel: Thanks I just go get changed Hugh: Yep same (They get changed and hugh walks out in a suit while waiting for Rachel then she walks out with a nice dress on) Hugh: You look beautiful Rach Rachel: Really Hugh: Yeah really Rachel: Well it nice to hear someone say that to me (They are walking to the car ) Hugh: Im sure Kim does everyday Rachel: He barely does anymore (They get in the car and drives to dinner and then gets there and sits at a table) Rachel: Thanks Hugh Hugh: For what Rachel: For just been the friend i need right now Hugh:Anytime you need me I'm here Rachel: Thanks that goes both ways (Waiter walks over and askes then what they would like to drink and eat ) Hugh: I will have a Raspberry to drink Rachel: That was always your favourite Hugh: Yeah and yours Rachel: I have the same and can i have the Chicken wrap for mains with some chips and we will share a garlic bread for entree Hugh: I have a Beef and Oyster for main and we will share a Chocolate sundee for desert Waiter: Ok (The waiter walks away) Hugh: Do you remember the time in Uni we sneeked away to have dinner together Rachel: Yeah and my dad caught us Hugh: I got in so much trouble Rachel: Truth be told he thought you had a crush on me Hugh: Well maybe I did (A hour later they finshed dinner Rachel at home and Hugh back at the flat he sees Martha walk in) Martha: Are you ok Hugh: I had dinner with Rachel tonight Martha: How was it Hugh: Good you know how i told you i liked someone but she was with someone else Martha: Yeah Is it Rachel you like Hugh: Yep please don't say anything to anyone that includes her or Jack Martha: It our secret Hugh: Anyhow over dinner it made me reliaze how much i love her Martha: You need to tell her Hugh:I can't it will break up her marriage Martha: Tell her she might like you to and she might choose you over him Hugh: Ok I will tell her tommorow Martha: Good now i going to bed Hugh: Night Martha: Night (Martha walks away and Hugh looks at a photo he and Rachel took during dinner and smiles at it before going to sleep)
  6. Yeah well im updating in the next hour so keep an eye out
  7. Chapter 2 (Hugh is walking along the beach after work when he sees Rachel sitting on the sand ) Hugh : Rach Hey (Rachel wipes her tears then looks up at Hugh) Rachel: Hey Hugh: Are you ok what wrong Rachel: It doesn't matter no one cares anyway Hugh: I care and Kim does to (Hugh sits next to Rachel) Rachel: Trust me right now Kim not even considering what I want Hugh: Which is Rachel: A family (Rachel and Hugh hug and Kim walks along the beach and sees then ) Hugh: I'm sure you guys will sort something out Rachel: What if we can't (They stop hugging ) Hugh: Look you need to tell him how you feel about him not considering or wanting this Rachel: You know what I going to do that right now Thanks for listening to me Hugh Hugh:Anytime (Hugh walks home and Rachel walks to the pier and sees Kim) (Rachel sits next to Kim) Rachel: You know i want a family so why can't you give me a reason why you don't want one Kim: Look I don't have a enough money to have kids and i don't get why you want kids now we haven't been married that long Rachel: I love you and want to have a family so why can't i have both now Kim: Because i not ready to have a family yet Rachel: Fine (Rachel kisses Kim and hides the fact she upset about not having a family) (Hugh at Home he sitting on the couch he open his wallet which reveals a photo of him with the person he loves) Hugh: Im love you Rachel Armstrong and I can give you everything you want (He looks at the photo before turning the light off and falling asleep on the couch)
  8. Thanks the next one will be up in the next hour
  9. You will have to wait and see. I will update in the next hour You have to wait and see
  10. Story Title: A Love to Last a LifetimeType of story: Short/Medium Fic Main Characters: Rachel, Hugh, KimBTTB rating: GGenre: Romance, DramaDoes story include spoilers: No, Any warnings: Sexual content, V/DSummary: Hugh is in love with someone but she with someone else. What happens when she finds out how he feels for her? Will she reliaze she have feeling for him? Will she love him to? Who is it Hugh likes? Chapter 1 [Martha and Hugh are talking as they walk along the beach] Martha: Hugh are you ok? Hugh: To be honest, I’m not ok Martha: Well do you want to tell me what wrong Hugh: I have feeling for someone Martha: Then tell whoever it is how you feel Hugh: It not as simple as that Martha: Why not Hugh: Because she with someone else Martha: Look you still should tell her Hugh: She might hate me for it Martha: Or she might realize she likes you to Hugh: I doubt she would like me back Martha: Well whoever it is would be the silly if they didn’t like you back Hugh: Any how I go to go to work I talk to you later [ At Hospital Hugh walks in to work and sees Juile at the nurse station] Juile: Finally you’re here Hugh: There lots of people on Juile: No there isn’t five people called in sick Hugh: Is Dr Armstrong here Juile: No she sick or at least she said she was she didn’t sound sick when she called in Hugh: Maybe Kim sick and she looking after him Juile: It seemed like more then that Hugh: I will go and talk to her once I finshed Juile: Well I called in 25 doctors who start in a hour you can take a break when they here and go and see her Hugh: I might just do that
  11. love this and love young Phoebe and Brody they need to get together
  12. Thanks glad you like hope you will read my new fanfiction i starting tonight about Rachel, Hugh and Kim Thanks glad you like it i hope you will read my new fanfiction about Rachel, Hugh and Kim that i will be starting tonight Thanks
  13. Chapter 4 (Ruby sees Geoff) Ruby: What happened Geoff: Your boyfriend dad punched me on the face Ruby: Ok that it i had it with him and his family hurting people im breaking up with him and moving out Geoff: when will you move out Ruby : I going to now (Ruby walks off and goes and starts packing) Derek: Where are you going Ruby:We are done im leaving Derek : no your not Ruby: I am Derek: Fine but not come back when you need a proper man Ruby: Don't worry you never see me again come near or Geoff and you will regret it (Ruby walks out with her bags and meets Geoff ) Ruby : Geoff thanks for this Geoff : Don't mention it Ruby: I still love you Geoff: I love you to (Ruby and Geoff kiss) THE END OF THE STORY Comments
  14. Yeah they both are bad but it will get worst and i do too
  15. Chapter 3 (Derek and Ruby at home and he holds up againest a wall ) Derek: I thought i made myself clear Ruby: I old enough to make my own choices Derek: If two people love each other they shouldn't be seeing others guys Ruby: They also shouldn't be hurting the people they love Derek: Well that not what im doing (Derek dad Tim walks in) Tim: You shouldn't be spending time with anyone but Derek Ruby: I can spend time with who i want to Derek: Yeah you can spend time with people but not him Ruby: His name Geoff and he my friend Tim: You love Derek so do what he says Ruby: I can make my own choices Tim: You can't (Tim walks out and goes and finds Geoff and he knows what he looks like because Derek showed him a pic of him) Tim: It Geoff isn't it Geoff: Depends who asking Tim: Stay away from Ruby Buckton she with Derek and there happy Geoff: Look i don't know who you are but Ruby and I are just friends Tim: Well it didn't look that way to Derek this morning Geoff: What, How do you know Ruby and Derek Tim: Im Derek father and my son isn't losing the person he loves because of you so stay away from Ruby Geoff: No can do she my friend and I wanna spend time with her (Tim punches Geoff) Tim: Stay away from her Geoff: No (Tim punches him again and walks away)
  16. Thanks Thanks and he is and i will Thanks and in chapter to comes they will do that some more
  17. Chapter 2 (It the morning Ruby have brusies on her face but she in the bathroom covering with fountain when Derek comes in) Derek: Look im sorry for hitting you but your not going to meet with him Ruby: Yes I am he my friend Derek: And i your boyfriend and boyfriend comes before friends Ruby: Look i haven't seem Geoff in a few years so i going to catch up with him i don't care what you say (Derek slaps Ruby and Ruby starts walking out the door) Ruby: Don't you dare follow me (Ruby walks away and to Waves and sees Geoff) Geoff: It good to see you Ruby: Yeah you too, Im sorry about what Derek said last night (Derek runs to Waves and watches Ruby and Geoff behind a bush Geoff: It all good What happend to your face Ruby: Oh I ran in to a door Geoff: So what been happening the last couple of years Ruby: Not much what about you Geoff: Well as you know i left the church and now I live in Melbourne but considering moving back to Sydney Ruby: Well you should we could see each other a bit more often Geoff: Yeah two years have been too long Ruby: Lets go inside Geoff: Yep sounds good (They walk inside and sit down ) Ruby: So how things with you anyhow Geoff: Um not good Ruby: Why what happend Geoff: Annie got in an accident a few months back and die Ruby: Im So sorry (Ruby hugs Geoff) Geoff: It hurts so much that i can't grieve Ruby: Look losing people you never grieve for property as your always grieving for then Geoff: Really Ruby: Yeah i still haven't got over Charlie death or Romeo Geoff: So it not just me Ruby: No it isn't (Derek moves inside unware to Ruby and watching then) Geoff: You know what we should do for old time sake Ruby: Yeah what Geoff: Have chocolate milkshakes and icecream then go for a swim Ruby: Omg Yes let's do that (Derek watches then as they order then eat and talk and gets annoyed then Ruby and Geoff walk to beach and Derek follows) Ruby: Lets do this Geoff: Yep (They take there tops of to reveal binki or shirtless body and runs in water and Derek sits on Geoff towel and watches then ) Geoff: This is great Ruby: Yeah the best Geoff: Nothing beats swimming with you Ruby Buckton Ruby: Or you Geoff Campbell Geoff: We been though alot of good times and bad times haven't we Ruby: Yeah (She looks and sees Derek) Ruby: Derek here i should go Geoff: Ok we will talk tommorow Ruby: Yep (Ruby runs to Derek and derek grabs her arm and pulls her of the beach and Geoff sees this and gets worry)
  18. Glad you love then reconnecting and trust me things with Derek are gonna get worst It derek and yes he is
  19. Glad you liked the chapter.
  20. Thanks. I also writing two fanfictions a trip of love and forgotten love would love you to read then and hear your thoughts on then Yep will do. I also writing two other stories trip of love and forgotten love can you read them and let me know your thoughts Yep i will update again soon and Ben changes side is gonna bring a twist in the next few chapters. I also working on two other fanfictions Trip of Love and Forgotton love i would love you to read then and tell me your thoughts on then
  21. Thanks i loved writing the chapter. There more amazing Geoff and Ruby scenes to come as for Derek it might not stop there
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