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I'm really sorry for not updating for a while. I've been so busy. I promise I'll have one up by Thursday. Sorry if you thought this was another chapter xx

Amazing update!!! I love the way you write this fan fiction. I can't stops reading once I've started. I'm really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx

You posted another chapter! I was getting worried about you... Another fantastic update as always! I can't wait for more! xxx

OHHHHH NOOOOOOOO!!!! GRANT IS SO HORRID!!!! I CAN'S BELIEVE HE SHOT CHARLIE!!! please let her be okay .... Another great, intense chapter! I can't wait for more Please update soon xxxxx

Fantastic chapter!!! I laughed a lot at Ruby and Casey's conversation on the beach Angelo is a stupid, ungrateful, selfish, annoying, disrespectful jerk!!!! I'm really looking forward to more Please update soon xxxx

Lovely chapter! Ruby and Casey Charlie should stop kidding herself and go out with Brax. Really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx

Fantastic chapter! Lucky you I'm glad you had a good time. I hope Brax can save Charlie in time. lovely conversation between Ruby and Charlie. Really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx x

I'm very happy that you updated! It was another AMAZING chapter. Loved Bianca and Charlie seeing each other again Tegan is just so annoying. I hate her! Really looking forward to more xx

I'm so sorry, I will post another chapter tomorrow! I have been really busy. x

Amazing chapter! I'm sensing something bad coming soon..... I'm looking forward to the next update More soon please xxxxx

Another good chapter Looking forward to more! Please update soon xx

Another amazing chapter!! Really looking forward to more Please update soon xx

A fantastic first chapter! I love it! You had me very intrigued the whole way through the chapter. I'm really looking forward to your next update More soon please xx

It's a shame that you're not writing anymore, it was an amazing fic but I am really looking forward to your next one xx

Fantastic chapter!!! Awwww to Bianca and Heath Really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx

Fantastic last two chapters! I'm really glad Charlie is keeping the baby I wonder what will happen when Brax finds out about her being pregnant... Really looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon xx

Great first few chapters! You've made a really interesting start on this fan fic and I can't wait for more. Please update soon xx

Amazing chapter Really well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon xx

Sorry, I've missed heaps on this one too. Looking forward to more Please update soon xx

I'm extremely sorry for not commenting for ages. I've been really busy. I'm LOVING this fan fiction! I like the way you introduce the different characters. I can't wait for more Please update soon xx

I'm really sorry about missing the last few chapters. They have been brilliant though! I'm really loving this fan fiction so far and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon x

I'm very sorry, I've missed the last few chapters of this fic. They have been fantastic as always and I'm really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx

Good story! x

amazing update as always xx

Another great chapter!!!! I'm really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx