alice93

You've got all the characters absolutely perfect. Poor little Casey, having to go through so much at such a young age You are such a great writer! I can feel the emotion but you don't beataround the bush! Loved it!

Loved all these updates, sorry it's been a while since I last commented Poor Heath, I can't believe that Brax would do that to his own brother. I find myself really liking Teagen though. And little Casey is beyone cute no wonder the kids emotionally disturbed...seeing his older brother "wrestle" naked with a girl ;p; Loved it again

Nicole was a bit of a beotch when she first came, but I agree, it's nice to have a girl who actually has a bit of attitude and is spunky and fun!

^^^ HAHA. I always thought Bianca was too good for Liam. Her and Heath's personalities may not be compatible, but I think they look much more like a realistic couple. Not that I'm saying that Liam is unattractive in any way, but Biana is such a bombshell she looks better with someone like Heath call me shallow! I hope that once they delve slightly more into Heath's character, and why he is like he is, and then hopefully he'll get some romance. But until they do, I think he's a bit too rough for any of the girls in the bay.

Aw, I love how Brax is so obviously clueless about his little admirer Tegan's really annoying. And poor Heath, feeling ignored I feel sorry for Heath in the show, too. Loved it, hope you update soon!

Aww no, I actually feel sorry for Cheryl. She seemed like an okay mother for a while. 'She smelt a little like fish, but that was Cheryl and he didn’t care.' Haha, I don't know why but this made me laugh Loved the introduction of 'PeeWee' in the last chapter, and seeing how he got his name haha. I love how much humility you're putting into these characters - if that makes sense. Loved it, update soon!

Aww I loved this chapter. Aww bless him meeting Sally. They would be an unlikely couple lol. Their mum is awful, they should go and live with Mrs Stevens instead. I'm glad you're incorporating what they are going through right now in h&a into the story loved it more soon xx

God, Cheryl is such a witch! Poor Brax, I love ho we're seeing him slowly become the Brax we know and love on the show. Bless little Heath lol Loved it Can't wait for more!

I love this, it's such an interesting story. Can't wait to get some more insight into their life

I'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter. What is Casey doing there. Loved it More soon!

Oh Casey, whatever could be the matter? great update, more soon!

So cute...and really well written

Wow I loved this. I'd never be able to write a character like Dex, he's too witty for me. But some of the stuff he said/wrote I could full on imagine him saying Awesome, I can't wait to read more!