KaiyaBlake

Oh my god, that was amazing!! You wrote it so perfectly and it described everything that she would have been feeling! Loved it! Great great great great great story..

Wow, this is really good. I loved how you wrote it all!! Now I really want to know what happened!! Great Start, Update soon please?

Aww that was a great end. Sad, but good Melody's parents are overseas on a holiday? wow, i wish i had those parents ahahah. Loved it. Great Fic!!!

i despise Roman . He is a know it all and thinks everyones in love with him. EDIT: I feel mean to the Roman fans. I get angry when people say things about Jack, so sorry lol.

Geoff's a d*ckhead!!!! How selfish does he want to be. If i were Nicole, I would seriously never talk to him again haha. But that wouldn't make a good story would it? Aden is so cute. I'm glad he loves all that stuff Great Chapter, I loved it update soon pleaseeee?

Melody and Jai!? Oh my god, poor people. Love how Aden and Belle stick together, they're sweet I hope Nicole tells Geoff about her being pregnant, he better take it okay haha, but somehow I doubt it with everything that's going on... Great Update :). Update sooon please?

I don't think i have ever commented this fic, but I just read it. it was so beautiful And i loved the ending, it made it seem more real, but it made me cryyyy Great Story.. Hope you write another one

No I don't think it's predictable at all... Of course Aden and Belle get together, the main characters in every story get together hahha, but it doesn't mean they'll stay like that.. (hope they do thought ) I love this story, I love the way it's written to haha. Oh my god. Nicole might be pregnant!? That would be so hard having to wait to find out.. Aden and Belle are sweeet haha. sh*t, I wonder where Jai and Annie are too? Great Chapter.. More sooon please??

This is great so far!!! I love how you put there thoughts at the start too I hope Belle&Aden get a chance to get together.. And Geoff should run off to Nicole ahaha. Great Chapters . Update sooon pleasee?

The Curious Case Of Benjamin Button.. It's the most beautiful movie i have ever seen. It reminds me of Forest Gump, the way it's set out.. But yeah, I love it

Wow! That was a perfect ending beggining? Chapter Can't wait for the sequel

Hahahha LMAO That Chapter was sweet/funny/sad. It was Amazing Great Chapter. Updattttee soon pleasee, but not until after Christmas lol. Enjoy Christmas

Jack's Alive Now he can go be with Martha finally haha. Awww I hope you do finish it, I love it Great Chapter, Moreee soon pleaseee?

Jack and Martha are the sweetest I wish that had happened on the actual show!! Great fic, I loved it

Hahahaha Aden aww poor Aden he doesn't feel good enough! I hope Belle shows him he is Great Chapter.. Update sooonn please??

That was the cutest chapter! Aden hurry up and break up with gracie haha ^^ Haa. My favourite bit Great Chapter. Update sooon please??

Belles to nice for her own good haha But it's sweet, although she should just go tell Aden and they can be together haha . Great Chapter. Geoff is funny Update soon pleaseeee?

That Chapter was hilarious Drunk Belle would be heaps of fun haha. I had so many favourite parts but this was the best!! I love how she's trying to make such a fuss about it! Aww I just love them two Get them back togetherrrrrrrrrrr!? Great Chapter. More pleaseeeee?

Hahaha. I love Adelle but I have to admit I agree. When I first came on here there were SO many J&M fics. Now you're lucky to have one to read

Another Fic! I love it I wonder what's up with Belle!? Hopefully her and Aden will just fall in love and he will help her But it's never that easy is it? Great Chapters . Update sooon please?

Oh My God. Ive spent so long trying to read this story, once i started i couldn't stop though! In Nicole's words it's Freaking Amazing haha. Everythings playing up atm so all quotes are in italics haha. And I need you to know that no matter what happened, whether I shouted at you or pulled away or beat myself up about it afterwards, not once have I ever kissed you and not meant it” That line even makes me melt - and I wrote it ahahaha, You're funny. *Smiles* Seriously how do you write such good things!? I'm like stunned. I had to pick out my favorite bits too. I hope this enlightens your day hahaha. “What?!” Belle tried to feign shock “Annie and I swapped rooms yesterday...the little...” “Belle” Angelo was clearly not amused. “Ok..ok. So I’m guessing you wouldn’t buy that he’s dating Irene now either?” She asked hopefully. “Belle” He repeated in exactly the same tone as before. “And Geoff would be really pushing it huh?” “Belle!” Ha! Belle's Hilarious.. "What happened to you?" Annie asked Aden as she trailed into the kitchen behind Geoff clearly having recovered from that morning’s illness. Aden hesitated and glanced at Belle before replying. "Belle" He told Annie "She's vicious when she's angry!" "Aden!" Belle laughed "Annie that is not true!" "Don't let her fool you too Annie, stay away from her!" Aden laughed as he exited the house and Belle was left to stare after him, mouth slightly agape. Knowing Annie he probably scared the sh*t out of her *Sighs* Poor Kid... “Well Martha was in the chemist” he admitted. “Oh no, did she see you?” she sighed rubbing her temple dramatically. “It’s ok” he comforted her “I just told her I think I’ve knocked up Nicole. Serves the little princess right, let people gossip about her for a change” Hhahahahahaaha... LMAO “It is Angelo’s isn’t it?” Instantly he knew he’d said the wrong thing as he saw something snap within Belle. “Actually I’m not sure” She replied jumping up and yanking her hand from him. “I mean I guess it could be Angelo’s or it could have been that night with Mr Stewart ...or that week with Bartlett... oh and then there was Geoff” she fumed. Belle's so sarcastic. I love it “And when exactly have you been checking Roman out?” “When haven’t I?” she winked at him cheekily. “All this,” she gestured to the both of them. “It’s all a ruse, I’m just trying to get close to Roman” Hahahaha. Evil lol. I can just imagine her saying that... “Belle, it’s so cold I can’t even feel my hands” he assured her. “Yeah well make sure I don’t either!” Hahaha *Laughs* “Nu –uh” he shook his head without opening his eyes. “Now who’s not playing by the rules?” he mumbled, still half asleep. A small, breathy moan escaped her exhausted body. “I’m cold” she whimpered as he lifted her palm with his own and pushed it back towards her on the other side of the bed. “Practice what you preach Belle. Practice what you preach” Hahahah. Practice what you preach. Cracks me up. “But it’s not really your place to be proud of me anymore is it?” Hate to say it Belle. But sucked in... Poor Aden, I want to hug him Hahah, now hopefully this HUGE comment makes up for ALL the times I haven't commented? Seriously Great Chapter and Story. Update soooooon Please? EDIT: Jesus Christ! Looks like I've posted a chapter. Woops, how embaressing?

Just started reading this fic. It's so good, I love it! Geoff's gay? I like it . It will be heaps interesting to see what happens with that. I love Geoff&Belle's friendship, they're sweet Hahaha I love how Belle just barged her way up the stairs, she's quite the funny one Great Chapter & Fic haha. Update soon pleaaseee?