Red Ranger 1

I'm not entirely sure about Belle and Aden having a positive effect on each other.Aden had already begun to improve before Belle took an interest in him, if he hadn't she wouldn't have looked twice at him(and didn't).They actually seem to bring out the worst in each other(ie.the skank incident, their treatment of Angelo).They're both guilty of tunnel vision at times, not caring how anyone else is affected as long as they're together.

Oh dear...Want to see their reactions when they find out what's happened.

Oh my...Looking forward to reading more.

Loved the Aden/Nicole material.And everything Belle said was absolutely spot on.They really do need to be a proper couple before taking things further.

I too was impressed by the ending and must add by heartfelt thanks to those already proffered for keeping us suitably entertained.

Once again, thanks to everyone who's been commenting on this fic and reading it.I started it in a rush before I could think about it hard enough to stop myself and expected it to have at best a niche readership so the response has been overwhelming.And I probably overstepped the mark for a T-rating on at least three counts but I was fed up of giving all my fics As. And having refuted one count of plagiarism, I should probably confess that one scene was heavily "inspired by" an earlier HA storyline.But thankfully no-one seems to have noticed that.

Ooh, it's been a while since I've looked at this page, things have hotted up a bit.Still don't like them, in case anyone's in any doubt.Two characters who only know each other to scowl at fall in love in the space of a couple of days?Yeah, right. Two of the more curious comments I've seen from the pro camp:If Belle had rejected Aden after he'd confessed his abuse(and, you know, called her a skank), he would have been sent on a downward spiral.Well, leaving aside the fact that he pretty much went on one anyway, is that really a good enough reason for going out with someone?I always thought she should have supported him and been a friend to him but not suddenly decided it made him decent boyfriend material.Did Aden really kidnap Belle?Well, he locked her in a shed and wouldn't let her out.He might not have tied her up but I've a feeling he did shove her.I remember her going to open the door, saying "I know you won't hurt me" and he physically prevented her from unlocking it.And she did seem to forgive him very quickly.She was still angry with him at the police station but by the time she saw him at the clinic she was unambigiously on his side. I'm not convinced either by the argument that "Yeah, Aden's counselling didn't last long but it would be really dull if he was having months of counselling and couldn't sleep with Belle."Why would that be dull? Why do Aden and Belle have to sleep together?It's as if either society or the mechanics of television mean a relationship somehow isn't valid if they don't have sex.I'd actually respect them more if they were capable of having a loving relationship without it. Belle being with Angelo.Aden's behaviour during the whole thing seemed to be a bit erratic.(Which is, I suppose, in character.)In some episodes, he seemed to have accepted he and Belle were over.But in others...I remember him coming on pretty strongly with Belle before the trial and acting as though he wanted to kiss her, then storming off in a huff when she didn't respond.And then he wandered into the Diner kitchen, straight past Irene and Roman(who for some reason didn't object to him going in there even though he didn't work there), and invaded Belle's personal space in a way that was frankly worthy of a restraining order.And then in their so-called reunion scene he has the gall to say "I let you walk away once."When did he do that?Even in that scene, Belle's telling him she's made her choice and she's with Angelo and he is clearly not going to take no for an answer.If it wasn't for the fact that Belle supposedly felt the same way, his behaviour would be downright creepy.Okay, I'll accept that, for whatever reason, Aden and Belle want to be together.But what they did to Angelo was wrong and whatever happened subsequently does not change that fact at all. I'm sorry, Adelle fans.I like to think I gave them a chance.But there didn't seem to be any thought put into this relationship and I long ago added them to the list of Pairings I Think Don't Work.It wouldn't be so bad if they weren't suddenly supposed to be the show's golden couple.Meant to be together?I hope not.

Fluffy highlight: "You're right, you do love me more." Comedy highlight: "How was the sex?" And I love that it was Geoff that got Aden and Belle back together.

Do not distress yourself unduly, my dear, your fiction is a worthy addition to those contained within regardless of its length.Another fine chapter, I particularly enjoyed the conversation between the Major and Miss Belle.

I liked that one, the way you showed how they were both feeling.Looking forward to a proper discussion between them.

Yes, those were two scenes that really should have been covered on the show, especially the second one.I thought the way the only question she had for him was if he was okay was very sweet.Good job!

Yes, I agree about Audrey and I'm surprised no-one's mentioned the fact that everyone thought she was crazy when she accused Richard.Although Maria's not really doing herself any favours by just wandering into Tony's office and going through his stuff looking for evidence.(Like what?A checklist marked "My plan to kill Liam"?)Although I loved the way Rosie didn't know what to do and started screaming for her mum. I don't really mind Tyrone and Molly, I think Tyrone's actually quite sweet and funny.I loved that bit a few episodes ago when he said he was going to work and Molly told him not to be sarcastic and he, in all seriousness, replies,"I'm not, that's genuinely where I'm going."

Well, it's been 25 chapters they had to give in sooner or later Yes, I know...Look, if I didn't sit here griping, people would think I'd died or something.And as Aden and Belle reunions go, that was a pretty good one.

I must join all those who have expressed sorrow at the forthcoming conclusion of this endeavour but feel assured that it will be enjoyable nevertheless.An excellent chapter, I particularly enjoyed the conversation between Mr.Campbell and Miss Nicole.

I'd have chosen Mel...It's probably a boy thing.Actually, I think Jerry would have been second.Darryl didn't really come into his own until lately, he was just the lazy one and David's more pleasant best mate.(Although he seems to have lost that title to Graeme.)

Very upset about Donna cheating on Marlon.They were one of my favourite couples and now they've been spoiled. The story about someone being murdered around Christmas that we all thought was Matthew is obviously Shane so I really don't have a clue what's going to happen to him.

If someone had asked me which Morton I wanted to stick around, Darryl would not have been top of the list.But it's about time Amber had a boyfriend so I'm glad he's staying for her sake.(Bit surprised Dev let him move in with them when there's an empty flat above the shop he could have had.Or have I missed something?)

Ah, another excellent installment and the situation satisfactorily concluded.I look forward to reading further.

Oh, I sense an Aden and Belle reunion coming up...At least someone's finally put a lock on that window. Liked him pretending he loved Nicole and her "I told you!" on seeing them together.

Thanks for your kind comments, people, glad you all liked the end and, indeed, the beginning and the middle.As I've never seen an episode of The OC, I think we'll have to chalk that one up to another example of Jung's collective unconsciousness. Do I have a preferred character to write for?The short answer would be no, although my most recent completed fics do seem to have centred around the current younger characters.But characters can be prominent in one and then in the background or wholly absent in another.It's just a question of what inspires me or what I dislike in the show and want to change. As for revenge, I like to think of it more as a case of serving the story although it's probably true that there are certain characters that I'd be more likely to do certain things to than others.I like to think I know where the lines are and I know which ones I can cross.

A most thrilling escapade, my dear.I hope for the continued good health of those involved.

Liked Belle's interaction with Angelo, Geoff and Martha.Hope she realises Angelo's right when he says they have their grief for their child in common. Nicole means well but she really needs to let Aden and Belle sort things out themselves instead of trying to push them back together.

My enjoyment of this fiction continues unabated.My thanks once again.

Wow!Belle's actually being mature! Liked that whole chapter, the interaction between them all was just great.(Liked Geoff whistling at Belle and Annie pointing out it's all right for him to do that.)

How unfortunate for Miss Charlotte to elope with Captain Harris in such a manner.I hope for a happy resolution to the situation.