Red Ranger 1 Posted April 7, 2017 Report Posted April 7, 2017 Woah! That was not a twist I was expecting.Josh and Kyle were lucky that Dimitri turned up (at least I assume they were, Josh doesn't seem too sure). So who's side is he on then?! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted April 7, 2017 Report Posted April 7, 2017 (edited) 23 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Woah! That was not a twist I was expecting Thanks Red! it's nice when you can actually surprise people. Glad I'm not that predictable then! Edited April 7, 2017 by Ludub 1 Quote
Guest Posted April 7, 2017 Report Posted April 7, 2017 Great chapter Glad Josh and Kyle made it out alive like RR1 said they are lucky Dimitri turned up at the right moment. That was quite a twist at the end. Update again soon Quote
bijou Posted April 8, 2017 Report Posted April 8, 2017 Great chapter As usual your twists and turns are amazing this one was completely unexpected and as usual your cliffhangers are leave me longing for more 1 Quote
Ludub Posted April 8, 2017 Report Posted April 8, 2017 12 hours ago, Kristen said: Glad Josh and Kyle made it out alive like RR1 said they are lucky Dimitri turned up at the right moment. Thanks Kristen! He really did save the day! Just a pity he hadn't turned up twenty minutes earlier! 2 hours ago, bijou said: As usual your twists and turns are amazing this one was completely unexpected and as usual your cliffhangers are leave me longing for more Aww, thanks Bijou! So glad you're enjoying it, and that I've managed to surprise you with this one! Lol! Should have another chapter tonight I think. Hopefully Quote
Inactive User Posted April 8, 2017 Report Posted April 8, 2017 Great chapter Glad Dimitri turned up and that Josh & Kyle made out of it alive Whoa at the twist at the end of this chapter Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted April 8, 2017 Author Report Posted April 8, 2017 Great chapter I'm glad that Kyle and Josh are safe but it sounds like it's not over. I wonder what happened to Kyle, he seemed a bit shaken up. There are so many twist. I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see what happens next and if Kyle and Josh's 'friends' are going to help them. Please update soon I can't wait to read more!!! 1 Quote
pembie Posted April 9, 2017 Report Posted April 9, 2017 (edited) Dimitri has always reminded me of John Coffee from The Green Mile Or maybe the BFG not so much now.. So you mean to tell me that kind slightly wacky lollipop man was all a trick? Aww I liked him mainly for his random Willy Wonka lollipop givings yes but still I am surprised I was going to make a rubber ducky shower joke here...But I won't Kyle and Josh goodness What a exhausting prison sentence this is. New nightmares all the time now they have gummy toothless Mark to dream about too. haha This Nikolai sounds like a lovely fella too Enjoyed my little mini catch up Edited April 9, 2017 by pembie 2 Quote
pembie Posted April 9, 2017 Report Posted April 9, 2017 Oh Dimitri I don't like this new Dimitri much The lollyipop Dimitri I will mourn and miss him dearly His a good actor though I will give him that not so good a cop though I don't think Vasily too Man these undercover cops are more bonkers than the criminals. I like the twist though I don't know how Josh is still functioning but never the less he is and that's something he can be thankful for.. He should get knighted by the Queen for this or something a certificate maybe 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 9, 2017 Report Posted April 9, 2017 I can understand Josh feeling betrayed, Dimitri seems to have let a lot of bad stuff happen in the name of maintaining his cover, although he seems to be just about on the side of the angels.Hopefully this plan won't go south again... 1 Quote
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