Red Ranger 1 Posted September 22, 2013 Report Posted September 22, 2013 Glad that Rosie and Lottie got everything straight(so to speak).Heath as Godzilla continues to be a way funny image.And looking forward to seeing what AJ does to Dex... Quote
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2013 Report Posted September 22, 2013 Awesome chapter. Liked how Rosie and Lottie got everything straight I can image Heath as Godzilla. lol! Looking forwards to see what AJ is going to do to Dex Update soon xx Quote
pembie Posted September 25, 2013 Report Posted September 25, 2013 (edited) That whole chapter made me laugh Lottie worrying about Rosie's sex toys, but still kissing her. Talk about girl on girl action Heath as a mini Godzilla, Ruby better watch out there I wonder if this plan of Indi's will somehow end up backfiring on her? Awesome chapter look forward to seeing what AJ has in store for Dex as well Well Done on writing your 50 chapters Edited September 25, 2013 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted October 20, 2013 Report Posted October 20, 2013 Great chapter. Update soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 20, 2013 Report Posted October 20, 2013 Woah, have you just killed Joey?Wonder what the plan is to cover up Blake's return.Looking forward to more! Quote
pembie Posted October 22, 2013 Report Posted October 22, 2013 Wow hmm yeah things aren't looking to good for Joey. Sounds like she has died. Unless that blue energy coming out of her means she has somehow gained a new power maybe. Or maybe she needs to get to water to heal? interested to see what happens there. Looking forward to the ad campaign and seeing if Alf really does believe he has just met Blake's gran Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 1, 2013 Report Posted November 1, 2013 Woah!I can't believe you killed Joey!And paralysed Sasha!Blake's cover story was pretty good though. Quote
Inactive User Posted November 1, 2013 Report Posted November 1, 2013 Great chapter Surprised you had killed off Joey! Pooe Sasha! Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted November 2, 2013 Report Posted November 2, 2013 WOW poor Joey and wow she's the first mermaid to die too I think. Also Sasha's paralysed I was shocked about that. I wonder what will happen with her now? I liked the way you brought Evie into this story. Very good update. Look forward to your next chapter Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 19, 2013 Report Posted November 19, 2013 Dex killing Joey does make me a bit uncomfortable but it looks like it's not going to be plain sailing for him.Wonder how things will go between Ruby and Sasha.And thanks for reassuring us about Evelyn. Quote
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