pembie Posted September 9, 2013 Report Posted September 9, 2013 (edited) Glad that Charile and Brax are working through the loss of their baby together. It's amusing how Grace seems to only have Peppa Pig things, like her glasses and her arm bands. Oh yeah I did get abit nervous when you mentioned their hotel rooms were up on the thirteenth floor. What with the number thirteen said to be unlucky. I thought it might of been a clue that more trouble is on it's way. I think it's clever how you have made Ruby and Xavier happier now, while it's the very opposite for Charile and Brax. Edited September 9, 2013 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted September 9, 2013 Author Report Posted September 9, 2013 Great chapter. Liked the talk between Charlie and Bianca Loved the Chax parts Update soon please xx Quote
beebee Posted September 9, 2013 Report Posted September 9, 2013 Wow ... What a beautiful moment on the balcony until poor Brax mentioned marriage :-( .. Please give Brax a break :-) ♥ x Quote
Spotd1 Posted September 9, 2013 Report Posted September 9, 2013 Great update Danni Glad Bianca mentioned the miscarriage to Charlie! The balcony scene was so sweet..felt for Brax. I understand where Charlie is coming from but I hope he can change her mind in time! Love that she would have a footy team with him though, if that isn't love..I don't know what is haha can't wait for more! Xx Quote
RoRo90 Posted September 9, 2013 Report Posted September 9, 2013 Amazing Chapter Just adore Brax. And I agree i do feel a little bad for Brax not seeming to ever get his way but I think given a few more years he may be able to sway her into the idea of marriage *Fingers crossed * But loved that Charlie said she would give him a whole footy team if that's what he wanted Glad things are going so well for Ruby and Xavier Looking forward to the next Chapter Quote
Sabrina Posted September 9, 2013 Report Posted September 9, 2013 Chapter 48 - I loved how Charlie and Brax's date ended. Chapter 49 - Aw, I loved Brax and Grace's day out. Chapter 50 - Aw, Charlie and Brax are so happy. Chapter 51 - Omg, poor Charlie and Brax. Chapter 52 - I liked Brax and Heath's chat. I hope Charlie doesn't keep pushing Brax away. Chapter 53 - I'm glad Charlie and Brax had a little chat. Chapter 54 - I loved the balcony scene. Hopefully Charlie might change her mind about getting married someday. I'm glad things are going well for Ruby and Xavier. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
pembie Posted September 10, 2013 Report Posted September 10, 2013 Oh man that wasn't the best timing from Brax there was it? On the plus side though at least Charile wants a family with him But wow a football team that sure is alot of kids to have. Look forward to more Quote
Kyle Posted September 10, 2013 Report Posted September 10, 2013 Bit worried about Xavier might do at the party :/ and Ruby for that matter. Loved Grace in this chapter Quote
emmamurphy8 Posted September 10, 2013 Report Posted September 10, 2013 (edited) Awh I love Grace and Brax's relationship i hope she calls him daddy soon, I'm worried for Xavier and Ruby. Please let them get through this they' re are such a good strong couple, I have faith they will get through this. I'm loving this family time they're are having on the holiday, I'm glad Bianca told Charlie she was expecting and I hope Charlie can just be happy and learn that it's now her and Brax for good they have so much to look forward to, I love how well the boys bond with their girls I love this story. Edited September 12, 2013 by John Spelling and Grammar Quote
Inactive User Posted September 10, 2013 Author Report Posted September 10, 2013 Great chapter Am worried about Xavier and Ruby when they go the party tonight. Loved Grace-she's so cute Update soon xx Quote
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