Inactive User Posted June 1, 2012 Report Posted June 1, 2012 Great chapter Roman as a zombie Hope Alf is okay! More soon please xx Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted June 2, 2012 Report Posted June 2, 2012 Hey Steve. Sorry for not commenting on your previous chapters, I got caught up in the early years lol. Fantastic updates, i love the way you write the characters. You're an awesome comedy writer. Look forward to more. Quote
Inactive User Posted June 3, 2012 Report Posted June 3, 2012 Had been reading every word of this chapter and it's really good More soon please xx Quote
Phoebe Posted June 5, 2012 Report Posted June 5, 2012 I liked Sid being to distracted by a Sudoku puzzle. The bit with Alf and Daisy was sweet. Really great chapter Steve! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 5, 2012 Author Report Posted June 5, 2012 Sorry I didn't read this before, I got distracted.I agree Sid doing Sidoku was fantastic, as was Alf and Daisy's simultaneous "Flaming hell."A female Alf, is the world ready for it? Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted June 5, 2012 Report Posted June 5, 2012 (edited) Awesome chapter. Funny parts for me were Casey going surfing in a lake. Does this lake really have waves big enough to go surfing? The banter between April and Casey and I like how everyone is so in-character. April wanting organic sausages and free range eggs. Look forward to your next update. Edited June 5, 2012 by ScreamingQueen2006 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 5, 2012 Author Report Posted June 5, 2012 Oh man. Everyone's reaction to having their breakfast served by Zombie Roman, especially April worrying if it's organic and eyeing up Casey.Can't wait to see how Dexter and Xavier cope with a combination of chess and Dexter's greatest fear. Quote
Inactive User Posted June 5, 2012 Report Posted June 5, 2012 Oh boy! Loved everyone's reactions to breakfast More soon please xx Quote
Phoebe Posted June 5, 2012 Report Posted June 5, 2012 I loved that chapter! Very funny! Update soon! Quote
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