Red Ranger 1 Posted May 18, 2012 Author Report Posted May 18, 2012 Oh my.The teens staying in a haunted house is a great idea and Xavier and Dex seem to be bricking it already.Looking forward to more! Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 20, 2012 Report Posted May 20, 2012 Liking the build up, can't wait to see what happens to them in the haunted house. Update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 23, 2012 Author Report Posted May 23, 2012 Oh man.April worrying about recycling.Ruby taking charge when no-one else wants to knock on the door.Harvey as a vampire and Melissa as a zombie.Cameron Welsh reeling off everyone's life histories. Excellent! Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 23, 2012 Report Posted May 23, 2012 (edited) This is so awesome. The gang finally arrived at the Haunted Mansion and how creepy it was too, the part of the woman Dexter saw and how noone believes him. April too busy texting Bianca, and Xavier's comment that he'd need to go the gym more to use the knocker on the door. John on finding it funny about the show and he thinks Xavier will be the first out. He doesn't have much faith does he? You write humour so well. You even added Cameron Welsh into this Fab chapter, can't wait for more, hopefully soon. Edited May 23, 2012 by ScreamingQueen2006 Quote
Inactive User Posted May 23, 2012 Report Posted May 23, 2012 Awesome stuff, Pembie Update soon please xx Quote
Phoebe Posted May 24, 2012 Report Posted May 24, 2012 Well! This place seems really scary! Glad I'm not there! Great chapter Steve! Quote
Bobby Forever Missed Posted May 25, 2012 Report Posted May 25, 2012 Cameron Welsh?? LOL I hope he ends up falling into his own plan whatever that may be! ;) Quote
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