Zetti Posted June 20, 2011 Report Posted June 20, 2011 Wow. You actually killed of Angelo. I am still in shock... I still cant believe you did that. I loved the chapter, especially the little Dex/Casey/Aden bit Looking forward to more soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 20, 2011 Report Posted June 20, 2011 Oh boy!It was Angelo!And Nicole was pregnant?Was it Angelo's or Aden's?And now Nicole's been kidnapped?!She really hasn't been having a good time of it, hope she's all right.Looking forward to more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 20, 2011 Report Posted June 20, 2011 Yes, go into hiding. ..... & come out again because you need to make everything better. Oh dear ... I hope Nicole will be alright ... I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 That was relatively okay until the end ... you had to make it sad on today of all days, didn't you? But of course, amazingly well written as always. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Posted June 25, 2011 Sorry Carina hows your birthday going ? Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Very well thank you ... kind of scary that I'm an adult now. But I won't be growing up anytime soon. In fact, my sister wrote in my birthday card: Growing old is mandatory. Growing up is optional. Anyway ... update soon please Mr! Quote
Zetti Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 The ending was so sad I really hate William I look forward to more Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Oh gosh.I'm wondering if what's happened to Nicole is somehow connected to what happened with Aden as a child.(Could that be Brax?)Looking forward to more of this. Quote
elikell Posted June 27, 2011 Report Posted June 27, 2011 You're very welcome pembie. Your writing has improved greatly, and I am loving where you continue to take this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Looking forward to more. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 27, 2011 Report Posted June 27, 2011 Ooooh, okay, this makes it more interesting, definitely. I loved that update & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
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