lozlovesh&a Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 I hope that Bianca gives her baby to a nice couple that wants it... it reminds me of Juno a bit! Expect obviously Bianca isn't young like that. I don't think Bianca could handle having a kid right now in her state in this story. please continue.
JosieTash Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 Such BEAUTIFUL moments, especially …… Charlie thought back to her own labour at 15 years of age. The crying, screaming, pushing, sweat, tears, blood, contractions, painkillers before after an agonizing 24 hour finally being took for a c-section. At the time Charlie thought that nothing was worth that kind of pain. But now every time she looked at Ruby, Charlie smiled and thought she’d do it all again if she had to. ”I...I’m pregnant” Bianca sighed relieved as Gina’s face dropped. ”And I really really need the money” Bianca nodded as she walked out of the classroom swearing she could see a grin appearing across Ruby’s face as Gina said that she would return tomorrow. Charlie swore she could hear Brax sigh against the phone. On the other end Brax held his head in his hands knowing Heath was hospitalised because of him.
soph1303 Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 Great update, I don't think that Bianca should give her baby up for adoption, but I can understand why she thinks that she has to though. Glad that Bianca told Gina and that Gina was understanding about everything. It was nice that Ruby was happy that Bianca was coming back. Poor heath - I hope he survives because I don't think that he did it. At least Brax knows now, but it will be hard for him and Casey waiting to know if he's gonna be alright. More soon please
Chickiboomxx Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 Great chapter! It's good of Gina, letting Bianca come back to work so she can earn some money. I'm really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
Lucii Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Thanks for the comments I love reading them and I hope you enjoy what is left to come xxx The pair were silent watching over Heath in that hospital room. The only sound they heard was the clock ticking and Casey’s sighs and tears. Every now and then Charlie’s inspector would pop his head through the door, smile and Casey and nod at Charlie to let her know to keep where she was. Casey wished Brax would come quick. And his mum. He didn’t like to be the only one at his brother’s bedside. Finally after what seemed like forever to both Casey and Charlie, Brax burst through the door and hugged Casey. He glanced down at Heath who lay motionless on the bed with wires and tubes covering near enough his entire body. Brax found himself welling up although he was too ashamed to cry. He did this to him. His own brother. Brax remembered the conversation with the river boys previously. How he basically blamed heath for Bianca’s assault and pointed the boys in his direction. He reminded the boys that violent attacks towards women or children were not prohibited and that Heath had crossed that line. Looking back on that conversation Brax sighed foolishly wishing he could take it all back. But he couldn’t and this was the price he had to pay – to watch his brother suffer because of his actions. Charlie watched Brax comfort Casey from a distance but she saw the look of guilt on his face when he saw Heath on the bed. She slipped out quietly through the door to come face to face with her boss. ”How they doing?” ”Not good Sir, I think it’s best we leave them alone” At that moment a slightly tipsy Cheryl Braxton was heard arguing with one of the hospital staff. Hearing the voice she’d heard quite a lot of in the past few weeks, Charlie went to calm her down. ”Mrs Braxton...MRS BRAXTON” Charlie’s voice rose as Cheryl tried to swing for the passing nurse. ”Where’s my boy?” she slurred her speech a little as Charlie grabbed her arm. ”Get off of me!” ”Mrs Braxton I’m taking you to see Heath” Charlie said firmly. ”He’s just in that room along there” she pointed it out and guided Cheryl into the room. Charlie asked her boss if she could go home earlier as she promised to help Bianca out. The inspector nodded calling nearby to Watson to cover Charlie’s shift. Watson rolled her eyes but at the same time she knew what a hard time Charlie had been going through. Charlie was on duty for another two hours with Watson as the Inspector had to get back to the station. Brax, Casey and Cheryl kept at Heath’s bedside as the doctor explained that he had lost a lot of blood and was going to go in for some surgery and would be in the hospital for at least a week. Charlie saw their faces drop as she tried to fight the tears herself. Brax glanced her way and Charlie smiled. He tried to smile back but failed. He gazed at her, his eyes pleading sorry for what he put his brother through. Charlie nodded a little before turning away. A few more doctors entered the room and wheeled the hospital bed with Heath lay unconscious. They took him into theatre as Casey’s face dropped and he collapsed into Brax’s arms. Their mum looked sober and scared as Brax placed an arm on her shoulder. ”Will Heath be okay Darryl?” she looked in her sons eyes for answers. He couldn’t look his mother in the eye. ”I don’t know mum” his reply came. ”I really don’t know” --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Once Charlie had finished her shift at the hospital she returned home first to check on Ruby before making her way to Bianca’s. She pulled the bobble out of her hair as she entered the door as Ruby raced through the door. ”How’s Heath?” she asked concerned for her boyfriends brother’s well-being. Charlie nodded, not surprised that Ruby had heard from Casey but more surprised that she wasn’t at the hospital. ”Erm it’s not good Rubes” she saw Ruby’s face drop. ”He’s in surgery as we speak and his family, understandably are a wreck” Charlie’s mind cast back to seeing Brax’s face go pale as he lay eyes on his brother and the mess Casey was in. ”Oh my god” Ruby blinked back tears as Charlie opened her arms inviting her daughter in for a hug. Ruby’s arms tightened around her mum’s back. ”I thought you’d be at the hospital” Charlie admitted not letting go of Ruby. ”I was gonna” Ruby broke off from the hug. ”But I thought I should just leave them until Heath gets better...if Heath gets better” ”Of course he’ll get better Rubes. The doctors know what they’re doing” Ruby smiled and nodded. She went to the fridge and poured herself a juice. ”You want one?” she asked Charlie who shook her head. ”I can’t stay long Rubes” ”But you’ve just got in from work!” Ruby moaned. ”I know it’s just Bianca needs me for something Charlie looked at Ruby who’s eyes widened. ”And before you ask I’m not telling you what it is.!” Ruby’s face dropped a little before she grinned at Charlie. ”I’ll see you later yeah?” Charlie called out as she made her way through to the bedroom and shoved on any clothes she could find. ”Uh-huh. Maybe we could watch a movie or something?” ”So long as it’s not too late when I return and so long as it’s not dirty dancing again then yeah sounds good Rubes!” Ruby grinned as she entered the front room and sat down on the couch, juice in one hand and remote in the other. Charlie returned a few minutes later, her hair hung loose and she had a top and shorts on. She held her purse and phone in one hand as she kissed Ruby on the cheek. ”Love you mum” Ruby called out after her as Charlie made her way towards the kitchen. ”Love you too Rubes” Charlie replied as Ruby heard the door bang shut. She grinned and glanced at her phone to see if there were any texts from Case. She considered texting him but decided against the idea. Instead she sat watching TV alone, unaware that somebody was watching her through the window... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile Charlie had arrived at Bianca’s front door. Taking a deep breath, she prepared herself for what would happen next and knocked on the door. April greeted her and invited her in, pointing upstairs because Bianca was in her room. Irene hollered out a hello from the kitchen and Charlie replied as she made her way up the stairs. She saw Bianca lay on her bed practically hyperventilating. Seeing Bianca in that state caused Charlie to remember the night she told her own parents she was pregnant. Beforehand she lay on the bed breathing like Bianca had; cradling her stomach like Bianca was doing now. Charlie took Bianca’s hand’s and pulled her gently off the bed. ”You can do this” Charlie placed one of her own hands on Bianca’s stomach. ”I know you can” Bianca nodded as she gripped Charlie’s other hand tightly. Charlie led her downstairs and both women were greeted by Irene and April. Charlie smiled awkwardly whilst Bianca hid behind Charlie, her blonde hair covering the majority of her face. The pair sat down on the couch as April moved along to allow Charlie and Bianca to sit together and Irene sat on the chair. ”It’s nice to see you down here lovey” Irene grinned trying to joke about Bianca’s non existence around the house recently. Bianca kept her face hidden and looked down at the floor. April sensed something was wrong and tried to brush Bianca’s hair out of her eyes only for Bianca to put it back where it was. ”Tell them” Charlie urged, nudging Bianca a little. ”Tell us what?” April and Irene cried out in unison. Bianca shook her head and tried to bolt back up to her room. But Charlie kept a firm hand down on her shoulder. ”Come on bee” Charlie urged again before Bianca beckoned Charlie down so she could whisper in her ear. ”You tell them” Bianca whispered. ”Bianca” Irene said as Irene looked at the floor once again. ”What on earth is wrong?” Looking round at the three concerned faces in the room Bianca decided to face her demons and bite the bullet. She took a deep breath before looking both April and Irene in the eye for the first time. ”I’m...I’m erm pregnant”
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Wow ... another brilliant chapter (as always). I look forward to the next chapter. I'm wondering how everyone else is going to react ... Carina xxx
elikell Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Wonderful. Just wonderful. Very well written. The emotions were just so well done. Glad that Bianca finally told everyone the truth. Hope Heaths okay. And that Ruby's okay and safe. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please
Arielxo Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Lovely chapter. Really well written. Poor Heath! Did he even rape Bianca? (in this fic) Glad Bianca finally told Irene and April. Eeep.. Wonder who is watching Ruby. Looking forward to more
Lucii Posted August 28, 2011 Report Posted August 28, 2011 Poor Heath! Did he even rape Bianca? (in this fic) All will be revealed soon <3 thanks to everyone for reading so far it means a lot and I hope to post the next chapter tomorrow sometime xx
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