Miranda Posted April 14, 2011 Report Posted April 14, 2011 “They’ve been having sex,”Rabbit opined. Miles looked at her uncertainly.“Are you sure?” “Kids know these things.” hahahahaha! Love it. I wonder if Miles will get a girlfriend in this fic, it is about time. After what he said to Romeo that time about vaguely remembering that electric feeling which Romeo had with Ruby. Poor old Miles. And speaking of camping and tents, my mind immediately went to, "I watched that whole Brokeback Mountain. From what I gather, something went down in the tent." Yes, was that from Glee? I thought of that. Although, it was so dark the Brokeback Mountain couple could have been wallpapering the tent for all I saw. Which in fact would have been much more gay really Quote
Inactive User Posted April 14, 2011 Report Posted April 14, 2011 Great chapter Rabbit rocksssss Update soon xx Quote
Jen Posted April 14, 2011 Author Report Posted April 14, 2011 And speaking of camping and tents, my mind immediately went to, "I watched that whole Brokeback Mountain. From what I gather, something went down in the tent." Yes, was that from Glee? I thought of that. Although, it was so dark the Brokeback Mountain couple could have been wallpapering the tent for all I saw. Which in fact would have been much more gay really Why yes, it was a Glee reference. Because Burt Hummel is a boss. Quote
JosieTash Posted April 15, 2011 Report Posted April 15, 2011 REALLY enjoyed this ….. …. especially Rabbit’s comments about Nicole/Lucas AND Miles’ love life. It’s also GREAT that she led Miles to the heart of Alf’s problems!!! Quote
Miranda Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 For a moment, Alf seemed lost for words.But then he smiled the smile of a man who knows he holds all the cards.“I’ll set up stall outside every single one of your lousy shops.I’ll sell stuff at half price, quarter price, heck, I’ll give the stuff away.I’ll make sure every fisherman in the district gets everything they want without making a cent and it’ll be worth it…because you won’t make a cent either and your little tinpot empire will go down the plughole.” Brighton blanched.“You wouldn’t.” “Try me.You just try me.And you’ll see that a dumb Aussie bloke like me is just as capable of playing dirty as a sly snake like you.” You tell him Alf/Mr Stewart! Grrr! I have a feeling that the plan is all coming together (turns suddenly in swivel chair and strokes white cat) Quote
Zetti Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 That was a simple yet effective chapter.. I like Alf's confrontation with James. Am suprised that Miles let Alf know that Rabbit is back but he seems to have accepted it... Hmmm am looking forward to the 'bigger thing' As always, a good chapter RR1 Quote
Barbara Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 Chapter 9: I love Xavier and Romeo's friendship! Looking forward to reading about their camping trip! I'm surprised Miles didn't realise why Nicole and Lucas were acting like that. I had to smile when Rabbit told him. Kids know a lot of things nowadays! James Brighton sure is an a******! I hope Miles, Rabbit and or Alf will find a way to stop him from stealing Alf's customers! Chapter 10: You got to love Mr Stewart! I hope James Brighton will leave him alone now. I like how Alf reacted to the news of Rabbit being back. Can't wait to find out why she really is back! More please. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 I was definitely very impressed with Alf in that chapter. I was practically cheering him on. Once again, perfectly written RR1, brilliant characterisation, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Jen Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Posted April 18, 2011 Your Alf characterisation is brilliant. I really liked that. As usual, your Miles/Rabbit interaction is great, and I can't wait to see what this bigger plan is. The suspense is driving me insane! Quote
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