HighwayUnicorn Posted April 29, 2011 Report Posted April 29, 2011 That was a fantastic chapter. I'm glad Nicole seems to be okay. I just hope it stays that way. & the characterisation of everyone else; Lucas, Dex, etc was just perfect. Well done, amazingly written. Love Carina xxx Quote
Zetti Posted April 29, 2011 Report Posted April 29, 2011 Aww a tear from my eyes.. I didnt think you would include a small mention of Jack but you did. I miss him I am glad that Nicole is allright but if Nicole and Romeo are okay... doesn't that mean Alf wil be the one to die? Love Dex in this chapter... Quote
Inactive User Posted April 29, 2011 Report Posted April 29, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it More soon xx Quote
Zetti Posted April 30, 2011 Report Posted April 30, 2011 Aww its finishing Classic chapter as always! Rabbit “Right!”She jumped down from the table and grabbed Miles’ hand.“We’re going to the beach.” “Do we have to?” “Never argue with your rabbit.Come on.” Hehe she really does make me laugh.. Rabbit suddenly gave a gasp of horror.“Oh no!Mr.Stewart!He’s going to be mauled to death by a sheep!” She saw Miles’ expression, half puzzled, half horrified, and broke into a wide grin.“Only joking.He’ll be fine.” Miles glared at her.“I don’t know why I’m going to miss you.” “You’re only human.”She hugged him and then stepped backwards, walking away from him. Aww bless Rabbit... She's gone but maybe one day she will be back I loved this fic. Thanks so much for writing it and letting us read it Quote
Miranda Posted April 30, 2011 Report Posted April 30, 2011 Aw... Miles and Gypsy they must be about the same age. Yes, I echo Zetti's thoughts. Thanks for this fic, its been so entertaining and funny and well written And I haven't forgotten about the Q, don't worry. Quote
Inactive User Posted April 30, 2011 Report Posted April 30, 2011 Aww it's over really...? And thanks soo much for sharing this fanfiction with us, RR1. Can't wait to read the next new fanfiction from you soon. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 30, 2011 Report Posted April 30, 2011 Well, thank you very much for another amazing fic of yours Red It was fantastic. That chapter was lovely as per usual & I loved Rabbit. Just brilliantly written throughout, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
JosieTash Posted May 1, 2011 Report Posted May 1, 2011 Chapter 14 …. LOVED that DEX saved Nic; his BTTF theory and Lucas’s reasons for coming back to the bay!!! Ch 15 ….. Gypsy/Miles !!!!! SOOOOOOOO cooooooool !!!!! Also, love just about everthing Alf said to Miles esp. I’m not going to be calmly driving along in my ute when some nincompoop drops an anvil on it." … and ….. Rabbit’s “Oh no!Mr.Stewart!He’s going to be mauled to death by a sheep!” REALLY loved this fic !!!! Thank you MUCHLY for posting it !!!! Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted May 1, 2011 Report Posted May 1, 2011 Aww Miles & Gypsy... I'd never thought of that! I loved this story, its been great reading it. Quote
Jen Posted May 1, 2011 Author Report Posted May 1, 2011 It has been a pleasure to read this fic. I certainly couldn't have predicted that ending. Gypsy/Miles is an interesting concept -- and with Lily, too, it's almost like he's getting a second chance. I like it. Rabbit, as always, is equal parts adorable and sassy. Miles isn't the only one who will miss her. Quote
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