JosieTash Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 LOVED Alf besting James Brighton AND Rabbit’s reaction when Miles told Alf that she’s returned !!!! I’m VERY muchly looking fwd to the BIG reason why the Rabbit is back !!! Quote
Inactive User Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 Great chapter Loved it Update soon xxx Quote
Miranda Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 “Have a good time camping!”Rabbit called after them.She looked at Miles.“See what I did with the implied double meaning there?” “You’re a comedy genius.” oh x 10 You're on a roll now, Red. First my fight scene now your own fic. Are you sure you don't want me to write a scene for you so I can keep up I'd also forgotten about Ruby's fish experience. I liked the way Rabbit reminded Miles he was Milco once too... I feel like Nic's going to have the baby with Lucas in attendance, but if she's only 7.5 months This story is so funny. But you can't kill Alf, Nic or the cheating tosspot can you surely? Nooooo! Quote
Zetti Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 The pair resumed their kissing for a while longer before they disengaged.“See you when you get back,” April told him. “I’m counting the hours,”Xavier confirmed. “No, I’m counting the hours,”Romeo corrected. I wish they had kept the Xavier/Romeo bromance “Have a good time camping!”Rabbit called after them.She looked at Miles.“See what I did with the implied double meaning there?” “You’re a comedy genius.” Sooooo funny! I wish I could write comedy! You and Miranda are the best! (dont let it go to your head ) Instead she was staring into space, a glazed look in her eyes, as though in a trance.“Oh, that doesn’t look good.” Rabbit blinked and then turned to him, a worried expression on her face.“Mr.Stewart?And Romeo?And Nicole?” “They’ve all gone, it’s just the two of us.” Rabbit swallowed hard.“If we don’t do something quickly, one of them’s going to die.” You wouldnt? Kill Alf or Nicole? I dont mind if you kill Romeo Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 I did read this earlier but it's so much easier to comment when I'm on my laptop. Wpw, that was an amazing chapter. I love the characterisation of everyone so well done. That ending though ... it's left me wondering ... Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Jen Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Posted April 20, 2011 Awesome update, Red. The Xavier/Romeo bromance is all kinds of hilarious and epic. Xavier looked round.“Hey, I’m not going to get a chance to do this again until we get back.Unless you’re going to oblige?” Romeo sighed.“Take as long as you like.” I don't even need to put my slashing goggles on when reading this fic. It's all just right there! It's fantastic. “Have a good time camping!”Rabbit called after them.She looked at Miles.“See what I did with the implied double meaning there?” “You’re a comedy genius.” Miles' deadpan reply to this is so awesome. Like I said before, "something went down in the tent." Lucas/Nicole is one of those ships I never would have considered, but it's so sweet and adorable and I now really like them together . Great job. Dun dun dun. Cliffhanger ending. You certainly know how to keep the audience guessing. Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted April 20, 2011 Report Posted April 20, 2011 I am loving this. Poor Miles feeling lonely.... Uh oh I hope no one dies........................ Continue soon please. Quote
Barbara Posted April 20, 2011 Report Posted April 20, 2011 I like how you mentioned Ruby having worked at the fish market before. I hope she is able to take care of the shop for a whole weekend though! I love how Rabbit reacted when Alf was talking to her. Miles followed her in.“Don’t mind me, guys!I’m just going to fit a bell around my neck so you can hear me coming.” I'd love to see that! Lucas and Nicole are so sweet! You had to end it there. Whoever it is, I hope Rabbit and Miles will get to them in time to save them. More please. Quote
JosieTash Posted April 21, 2011 Report Posted April 21, 2011 REALLY enjoy this …… …..especially the reference to Milco; Ruby getting a mention; and how thoughtful Lucas was with the day spa idea and all !!!! Of the 3 possibly at death's door, I like Romeo the least !!! Quote
Zetti Posted April 22, 2011 Report Posted April 22, 2011 Wow... I liked and hated the chapter for several reasons! Miles brought the car to a stop near the beginning of a path through the woods.“They were going to head this way, we’re going to have to go on foot.” “Lead on, MacDuff,”Rabbit agreed, getting out of the car with him,“Let’s hope the cut price cavalry is enough.” “Can’t you just, like, zoom on ahead and check on them?”Miles asked as they headed down the path. “What, you expect me to lock onto their brain waves or something?”Rabbit mimed pushing buttons on a keypad.“Gooshie, centre me on Romeo!”She paused and then looked back at Miles.“Ziggy doesn’t have the answer right now, Sam.” “Oh boy,”Miles sighed. Squeals! Rabbit can be a ray of sunshine in such a weird way Nicole made to go upstairs but as she reached the door a surge of pain went through her stomach.She gasped, clutching the doorframe.For a moment she thought it had passed but then it came again.She groaned, sinking to her knees.Was she going into labour?Was this what having a baby felt like?She didn’t think so.This felt like something else.Something worse. “Lucas!”she tried to call but it came out as a strangulated gasp.The pain seemed to be worse now.She sank to the floor, unable to even scream, everything going gray as she passed out… Noo! Dont kill Nicole! Lucas?!?! Come back now! Hope you update soon (and kill Romeo!) Well done Red Quote
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