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^ I found that hilarious too ... Dumber & dumbest. That was hilarious.

I love Rabbit ... I love how you're portraying her (& everyone else) in this fic ... it's just amazing.

Another great chapter. Well done.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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I've heard Baisers volés is a good movie but I can't say I've watched it. It sounds romantic and perfect for the evening Xavier had planned! Too bad, Xavier didn't know Rabbit left him that letter because he should be thanking her. :wink: Hopefully, April and Xavier can be happy now.

I like Lucas and Nicole's relationship but I'm starting to wonder if he isn't hiding something. I don't know why though. :unsure:

Rabbit sighed.“Just kiss the girl, Dumbo!”

April moved so she was standing in front of Xavier.Taking the hint, he gently pressed his lips against hers and they started kissing, tentatively at first but slowly becoming more and more passionate.He pushed her against the bench and undid the top button of her blouse.

Rabbit grinned.“I love it when a plan comes together.”Then she realised exactly what Xavier and April were doing.“I don’t need to see this,”she decided, hastily jumping out of her seat as the pair headed for the bedroom.

Rabbit's reaction! :lol:

More please.

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SOOOOO muchly enjoying this !!!

The “You’re not cracking a safe.” scene was VERY cool …..

……and I love that its like Nicole’s pregnancy is like an aphrodisiac in your fics [with her getting together with Ruby in “Spare Pair” and Nicole/Lucas in this one] !!!

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I always end up reading this story with a grin on my face :D. It just makes me feel really good. The humour is awesome, and you manage to keep all the characters in sync with this right balance of wit and sincerity.

Rabbit rolled her eyes.“Okay, sometimes you can be too honest…”

I really adore the image of Rabbit sitting there judging and side-eyeing the romances of teenagers. She is clearly very wise beyond her years.

Looking forward to more :).

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Loved the awkwardness between Miles and Lucas/Nicole :lol:

Rabbit was equally funny in this fic as well!

“So…you’ve set Nicole up with Lucas, you’ve set Xavier up with April, why can’t you find someone for me?”

“I might be an extraordinary individual, Miles, but I’m not a miracle worker.”Her gaze wandered across the park.“Uh-oh.”

Hehe. I would love Miles to get a decent partner as long as it is not Leah!

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Wonderful as usual.

My favourite was definitely this;

“So does this mean you don’t want us to see each other anymore?”

Xavier clapped him on the arm as he went towards the main part of the house.“Sorry, mate, but what can I say?She’s better looking than you.”

I adore your Xavier/Romeo bromance. I hope Romeo doesn't feel all left out now that Xavier is back with April. And speaking of camping and tents, my mind immediately went to, "I watched that whole Brokeback Mountain. From what I gather, something went down in the tent." :P. I don't know what my mind does sometimes. And for that apologise.

The plot thickens with Alf and the bait shop, and also Rabbit's purpose.

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Fantastic! Love 'just hanging'. Lucas & Nic are great together in this and I love that you put april & xavier back together.

HOping Alf's business will be alright. Rabbit rocks. :)

Continue soon.

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