ldscott Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 Just caught up on the last couple of chapters. Love the intrigue into what Justin's connection with the Joe guy is and the fact that he has a son that not even Aden knew about! The writing is brilliant hun, it flows well and the interaction with the characters is just how I imagine it would be onscreen. I just wish aden and Belle would get together already! Hope this is the sort of feedback your looking for Lisa x PS update soon! (Please?) Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 Oh my gosh ... Justin! Wow, I did not see that one coming! I agree with Lisa though that Belle & Aden need to get together ... I loved it, another amazing chapter so well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Posted April 18, 2011 Woah.Definitely didn't see Justin having a son coming.Slightly worried about what exactly he's got himself into and what his connection to Joe is.Looking forward to more. Quote
Miranda Posted April 18, 2011 Report Posted April 18, 2011 Gosh, that is mysterious. A secret son and a secret ID exchange Very interesting though Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted April 18, 2011 Report Posted April 18, 2011 ooooooooooooooooooo!! getting interesting with little Matt, please update sooonnn, loving adelle fluff Quote
Zetti Posted April 18, 2011 Report Posted April 18, 2011 Lisa: Thanks so much hun! I appreciate the comments Carina: Thanks! Miranda: The secret ID exchange... the truth will out Red: Thanks I will update sometime later this week if my essays goes well Quote
ldscott Posted April 18, 2011 Report Posted April 18, 2011 No problems hun, Good luck with the essays! x Quote
Inactive User Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 Had been reading the last two chapters and wow they are both great to read Really interested and looking forwards to see where you are taking this And good luck with the essays *hugs* Quote
Zetti Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 Had been reading the last two chapters and wow they are both great to read Really interested and looking forwards to see where you are taking this And good luck with the essays *hugs* Thanks Sarah *hugs back* My essay are all planned out so I am now writing the next chapter Should be up later or tomorow Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 19, 2011 Report Posted April 19, 2011 Loved everyone's interaction in that chapter & the emotions were well written. Loved Casey in that chapter. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
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