Barbara Posted November 13, 2009 Report Posted November 13, 2009 Great chapter! Go Ruby! She could be a police officer someday. James put fire to the school. What did the school ever do to him? But then again, would an arsonist need a reason to put fire to a building? I hope Ruby (in Charlie's body) and Angelo will be there asap and save the pupils. More please. Quote
Danni02 Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Posted November 13, 2009 Wow loved that chapter! Im glad Ruby caught the arsonist & that Charlie got everyone out to safety. But omg Charlie! She'd better be okay! Please update soon. Quote
Yorkshire-Gal Posted November 14, 2009 Report Posted November 14, 2009 Oh my word, what a fantastic chapter i seriously loved every line of it. I really hope this brings them closer together, and i cannot wait to find out if it does. please update soon. Quote
Barbara Posted November 14, 2009 Report Posted November 14, 2009 That chapter was brilliant. Yay! Ruby caught the bad guy! I'm glad Martin decided to listen to Charlie in the end. She was very brave and saved the others. I hope she's okay though. More please. Quote
Danni02 Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Posted November 16, 2009 (edited) Charlie shook her head."No.Because I'd rather it was me who'd been in that fire than you" That bit made me go 'Awww' And they got changed back! So hopefully they are starting to understand each other now.... And can get things back on track. Awesome update. Update again soon! Edited November 16, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
Barbara Posted November 16, 2009 Report Posted November 16, 2009 I'm glad they're both okay. They got their bodies back! Hopefully, things will get back on track between them now. More please. Quote
Danni02 Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Posted November 17, 2009 Aww the last chapter Loved it though! It ended perfectly! Quote
Barbara Posted November 17, 2009 Report Posted November 17, 2009 I can't believe it's over already. Like Danni said, it ends perfectly. Charlie and Ruby finally understand each other. Quote
aweil12 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Posted November 17, 2009 awww..beautiful ending..love that ruby and charlie understood each other..well done awsome fiction... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 18, 2009 Report Posted November 18, 2009 Thanks, as ever, for all your comments.I seem to end every fiction by saying it was a bit different from what I normally do, so I'm not sure what it is I do normally do anymore.But I'm glad that everyone seemed to enjoy it. Quote
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