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That chapter was great. I loved it.

I'm happy that Annie and Ruby were found. I liked Charlie and Nicole's chat and also, Ruby and Nicole's.

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I read this from cover to cover last night, after your comment bout it in “Spare Pair”.

REALLY enjoyed it !!!!

Some GREAT moments …......

The Nic/Rubes kisses AND Ruby/Annie [and Annie's comment bout how not having to worry bout the boy shaving];

Ruby’s commenting a NUMBER of times to Charlie about being a temporary lesbian;

The irony that Ruby was the one disadvantaged[?] by someone else not thinking before they acted for a change;

Jai's talk to Annie bout how people can be different but still be friends .... and how it GLADLY reminded me of when he talked to Ruby when Charlie "hooked up" with Joey;

and ESPECIALLY …

The BEAUTIFUL last scene …. Rubes dreaming of Nicole !!!

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Thanks, JT, I'm glad you enjoyed it.I've always been a bit worried that the "just friends" ending is a bit of an anti-climax but, looking at the comments on here, no-one else seemed to mind so maybe it's just me being overly critical.

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