HeavenForbid

Last two update were great! YAY! Jack and Martha are together again! And Alf is waking up! Update soon

Oooooo That was really good! I love this! Update soon

Great Update! I dont like the sound of the guy! Still wonder want he wants Update when you can

Great chapters! Had a few to read! I bet she is pregnant And she wants to be with Jack but he has a girlfriend or something Updae soon

No, It is not finished yet. I have the rst of the fic written though, so I decided to put in those teasers Another 9 chapters left.......... Chapter 28 “We will be over at 6 then” said a voice on the phone. “Thank you” Becky said and hung up. Becky went for a walk. She saw Martha on the beach. She walked into the diner and saw Lucas. “Hey! What are you still doing here?” he asked smiling “Change of plan! I am staying” Becky replied ***** Rebecca was on her third bottle of wine by the time 5 in the evening arrived. AJ came worried about her. She had not stopped drinking since she came home from the hospital. He went into the bedroom and talked to talk to her. “Get me another bottle” Rebecca said “Don’t you think you have had enough?” asked AJ “No! Get me another.” Shouted Rebecca again “No. I won’t. You can get it yourself.” AJ said Rebecca got up and walked out of the room. She came back a few minutes later annoyed “There is none left!” she yelled at AJ “Is that my fault?” AJ snapped Rebecca got back into the bed and AJ went out of the room ***** Everyone was in the Fletcher household at 6. Becky waited nervously for them to come. When Martha came home she didn’t say a word to Becky. She was furious at the way Becky spoke to her and saying that she was an unfit mother. Sally cooked the dinner. They all sat down. Sally noticed there was some tension between Becky and Martha and she wasn’t the only one that noticed. Alf and Morag did as well. “Where is Ric?” Martha asked “At Mattie’s” Sally said “So love, Why did you change your mind?” Alf asked Becky “Oh…Well…Me and Lucas are doing great so - ” There was a knock on the door. Becky’s heart skipped a beat. Sally got up and opened the door. Standing there was two women. “We are from social services” said one of the women. Martha looked around. She looked at Becky who was crying. “You b*tch!” Martha shouted “Martha! I am so sorry! But the kids need a good home and a safe environment to live in” Becky said “Don’t ever speak to me again. And you!” she said looking at the women “You! Will never take my babies away from me! I am a good mother!” “I am sorry. But we have to investigate that statement” said one of the women “What the flaming hell is going on?” Alf asked Martha ran out of the room and up to the kids. Becky filled everyone in. “What?” Alf said shocked “We have to investigate this…” one of the women interpreted Martha came down the stairs. The two women talked to everyone in the home. They agreed that Martha was not able to look after the children. They would be taken away from her. Martha ran out of the house. “Where will they go?” Becky asked “Well…In foster care for now” “Please. Can I look after them?” Becky asked “Becky - ” Morag started to say “Please! I will take such good care of them. I have basically been their mother since they were born” Becky begged “I don’t think that is such a good idea!” Sally said “Not if you are living here.” Said the women. “I can sort that out. Give me a half an hour” Becky asked Becky left the house and went over to Lucas’. He opened the door. “I need to ask you something” she said Preview: Will Becky get the kids? Will Martha clean up her act?

Teasers from the next few chapters - She got butterflies in her stomach - "Would you like to dance? I love this song" - "Never been so sure about anything before in my life"

Teasers from the last few chapters - "Get you stuff and get the f*ck out of here!" - She was not able to drive under her current state. - "Call an ambulance" - "Follow me and I will show you exactly what I mean!"

Well dont kill him but....... Dont make him be with Sally Is it strange to think that Sally and Rocco would actually make a good couple?? Excellent chapter! Johnny is so evil! What has he done to Sally?

I loved it as well! Great update! Love this fic. Totally forgot about Friday the 13th! I wonder what that dude wants!

Great chapter! Sally dont be annoyed at Rocco I wanna know what those pictures are of! I would think Rocco and Sally tied up or something But I could be totally wrong. I hate Johnny Kill him! Kill him now! And then Rocco and Sally can live happily ever after..... Oh wait.....Brad....Kill him too Sorry about my little rant lol! Anyways brill chapter! Update soon

Thanks for comments Update in the next half an hour

^^ Well you will have to wait and see what happens

Just read this fic now! It is really good! Cant believe he is the dad! I wonder what could be written in Lucas letter?

Thanks all for the comments. I have just wrote the very last chapter now. But there is another 12 chapters to go before that. Will update soon. Maybe later on today as I dont think I will be on tomorrow

I hope she is ok! Great chapter!

Yup they are! Strange to think that and that they are 16! Thanks for the comments Update soon

Yup...she chose them! lol I had picked two names already....Emma and Kerrie (I think) But I changed them

OMG! Amazing updates! Had a few to catch up on.... Update soon

Great updates! Update soon

Last two chapters..........amazing! I really hope Ava is ok! She better be

Update in the next hour or so! (Computer broke again!)

Great update! She better be found!

Excellent chapter! This is so good! Can't wait for an update Spoliers sound good