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Oh, the big 6! Nervous about the leaving, at all?

Aww Martha's scared! That is SO cute! That Chapter was hilarious! Well, to me anyway. And I'm strange... Jack's so cute. And i found the Bin Liner funny. Don't ask me why! Great, funny Chapter Rach. Can't wait for more

This fic is way cute. For some reason I laughed at Martha running around the Kitchen like a headless chicken... I actually imagined Martha with Chicken legs, and wings without a head! (That will make a great sketch, you know.) Aanyway.. great Chapter and great writing Rachel... I love Martha.

Ohh, nice two Chapters. I'm sorry I didn't get around to reading before, never noticed you Updated. Okay, I don't have much time for a long Review, so I'll cut straight to the point. I loved every intense second of it. You have a way of ending the chapters, so that you have the readers gasping for more... Yeah... that's pretty damn good thing... I could pick out a sentence, any sentence, in this story and point out a million good things about it. So, chosen at random: I liked the descriptions in that sentence. Subtle, yet powerful, and you can just build up in your mind that you are Robbie stumbling throughout that creepy cemetery... Wow. That was just incredible... I can just imagine the scene, and her gasping in pain, and her being pulled away... you are a great writer. You have me on my knees begging for more, here! Oh, and you inspired me to write something scary. Hmm...

I'M TOO SEXY FOT MY HAT, TOO SEXY FOR MY HAT, TOO SEXY FOR MY HAT, PLEASE GIVE ME MY HAT! Sorry Rachel...

Aww, this is getting so cute. LOL Rachel! That's hilarious. but he's never too sexy for his Officers Cap, I'll tell you that much. I'm too sexy for my car... *dances around the room singing and ends up in fits of laughter* Nice sentence Update soon

There's such a thing as Panda fans? ...

You used the title! Hahahaha she's afraid of Spiders! The really do appear like a couple, Rachel. Update soon (or not.,.. whatever. Just Update )