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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Laura didn't tell Nate I really thought she was for a min there he might work it out through teasing us like that look forward to next part

I like Nate and Laura being like a mini version of Aden and Belle it's a nice touch Hopefully Nate will help Laura out if and when she tells him look forward to more

Marilyn's abit batty isnt she with the whole new identity thing I like this it's a great twist poor Nicole hopefully Hilary will let her bond with Rob Hopefully nothing will happen between Angelo and Stacey hopefully he will think twice about it Really like this story

Thanks Carina glad your enjoying it I have no idea where I got this idea from it come to me while I was cooking one day Thanks for the commet meant alot Thanks Red watch this space

This one shot is very good You had me guessing who the person was right up to the end The emotions and feelings were wrote really well Well Done

Thank goodness for Roman talking sense into Nicole good update

oh dear why are Aden and Belle stories so sad good update I will be back to cry over your next update later

This is really funny well done the both of you

cool will do

I think you might kill Aden off in a plane crash bet I'm way off the mark just the where you wrote a few bits of the chapter made me think that

I like Holly giving Aden her big list of stuff to buy hmmmmmmm I think I might of worked out what you have in mind lets just say I think sad times are ahead I could be wrong through good update

Good update It's good to see Roman again Angelo just go and be with Nicole very well written

That was a sad chapter Laura what are you doing hopefully Nate will help her out good work

How can I get Rob without making myself look deluded? You can't Marilyn too late for that don't trust her Angelo another good update

Cantwait to see where this is going I like the mystery to this story

Andgelo and Nicole stop being silly get together already that was a very soopy chapter there nice to have a break from Marilyn look forward to more

I like this fiction so keep going with it I'm wondering if Aden's cancer will come back ?

Oh don't hide from us Very good update I think I can sense a catfight coming up for Nicole and Marilyn I might be wrong I hope Marilyn is happy with herself Your a great writer

Thanks for the pat on the back Miranda yep Nicole's with Angelo for the time being

Nice few updates there part 5 was abit to soopy through only kidding was quite touching part 6 was abit wacky how wacky can Marilyn get just go leave Rob alone you should write for the show I would love to see that knife scene on tv

Wow looks like it's going getting very intersting wonder why everyone can see Rabbit

Nicole better not lose Rob or I will very annoyed good chapter

My hatred for Marilyn is building she really doesn't have any rights towards Rob and making alot of ememies too if I was Nicole I would bitch slap Marilyn really good update

cool fan fiction I'm hating Marilyn through she sounds like she's going give Nicole a hard time look forward to more

how about Nicgelo very good story really enjoyed it