samdukefan
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Temptation (by sevenpuddings) - comments
samdukefan replied to matty and luke forever's topic in Comments
THAT WAS GREAT! Okay, so two sins down, five sins to go....and I have to say, the way you write is INCREDIBLE! I know it's in first person pov, but by the wicked cool trickery of my mind, it plays out like I'm really watching the scene, and that's seriously great! I mean the story, not the trickery ;) I could definitely see this couple, and am looking forward to the third sin Great work!