Jamey-Maria

OH, sad! Damn that smug waiter. You wait, one day she'll walk in there with Jack and a massive rock on her finger. (hopefully) We'll see who's smug then. lol Great chapter!

Oh i loved! It made me all warm and fuzzy, lol!

Enjoyed reading it again! Please update soon! Love it already!

Warren get away from Jack! So cute how he came to Martha's rescue though when she had only said like one sentence! Please update soon, great writing!

Yes, yes, yes! Loved the past two chapters, despite the ending. No more Rose yay! You HAVE to write a sequel! Pretty please *smiles sweety*

All i can say say is, Wow Nicole.

Agree with that! 2) I think it's quite obvious that no matter how you do it, Jack snd Martha need to get back together, if it doesn't happen i will understand but i will cry! (you don't want that on your concience do you) lol!! 3)You have, (like many other writers on this board) talent. Firsrly it's a j&m fic so of course i'm going to read it. Secondly, i'ts very hard to write a fan fiction that is interesting, doesn't give the reader exactly what they want, but also leaves room for hope that the ending they want is going to happen. And thirdly you obviously have a way with words because i can imagine the descriptions as i read them!

Just caught up! They're so great. I love them both, but i prefer that endless summer. The gilmore girl jokes were very funny (being a fan myself) Yours was probably the first fan fiction i read that had babies and marriage and didn't make me feel sick or like it was over done! It was really sweet! Your an excellent and amazing writer, can't wait for the next update!

Before i go on a rant (apologising in advance) Dolly your a really excellent writer and i just caught up, brilliant! Your other fic that you summed up in a nut shell sounds............ well quite morbid. lol. But i'll read it and tell you what i think. (i just know i'm gonna regret this) Anyway, here we go! First i was crying my eyes out. (very emotional lol) Jack you flippin looney, how could you do that to Martha? What on earth are you thinking? No you're not thinking!!! You know i hate you at this moment! You don't love Rose you love Martha and the fact that Rose is a nice person makes it even worse. Best friends don't kiss their friends true loves, that is so wrong. I'm now really mad that he could be so dumb and not make up his mind about who he loves. Hey Jacky boy, i'll tell you, you-love-Martha-and-you-always-will. How dare you feel a tingle when you touch Rose. That's reserved only for you and Martha and no one else, got it!? Oh my goodness, i'm insane lol. *runs and hides* Please update soon, i promise i won't do this crazy rant thing again, great writing.

I couldn't agree more. Jack com'on surley Martha is more important and you will eventually......................get your job back. Great writting jackandmartha!!! Please, please, please update soon! Please lol

That was sooooo not boring!!! Love the way you put your own spin on why his dad died, that was really clever. Now back to the chapter, OH MY GOODNESS!!! He is absolutley crazy, if he hurts Martha again Jacky boy won't be too happy!!! Corey, you betta watch out because when Jack gets you it's going to be bad!!!!!!

You know like the music when a hero comes? Maybe if i do it like this: Dun-da-da-daaaahh. If you don't get that then don't worry, it's more like music. It's very hard to write!!!

Beautiful, just beautiful!!! While i'm extremely glad that your doing another, i simply can not believe that you are going to put them through more! lol. However like Jack said "They are going to be together for ever". Even if some crazy, (Ah, that would be Jenny) women basher, (that title goes to Dave) or sleazy, creep (definetley Callum) comes into the picture..........................great writting Nicole!

Couldn't keep her legs shut. pffft. If you were around temptation like Jack then it is TOTALLY understandable. lol. Have i said that i think Corey's a total physco latley? Poor Martha, but don't worry Alf is on his way! Jack you betta get your butt down there too! Oh and that was fantastic writting. Just brilliant!

Yay, yay, yay!!!!! They are spending time together and there's no screaming, no yelling, no guns, no crazy/evil women bashers, just true love! Ahhh *sigh of relief as tear rolls down cheek* Beautiful, just beautiful!

Thank goodness, it has felt like ages! (When it reality it hasn't been) lol Can not wait!

I knew it, i just knew it. How could he do that to Martha. CREEP! Don't worry though Martha, Jack will save you. *dundudada* It's Jack to the rescue.lol. Please update soon!

Nicole I know I have said it before but I will say it again, this fic is awesome and I can't believe it's ending. *tear rolls down cheek* You really are a talented little writer aren't you?lol. Seeing as they're on the cliff where they shared there first kiss maybe they could end it there aswell and start afresh? Please!!!! Well however it's written they better have a happy ending or else! lol That army of little people will turn on you! lol. Please update soon I really can't wait.

This is brilliant! You've really got a talent for writting. Please update soon i have so many questions, like what is Martha thinking? Has she completley gone mad? Why did they break up? And who on earth is this Warren Showden? I don't like him already. I just know he's bad news.lol. Nah just kidding, i'm just an over obsessive j&m fan. As for Nicole, you and your imaginary friends!

Ah you stupid, stubborn, pig headed children, stop this nonsence and hook up! NOW! lol, great chapter as usual, i must admit i feel sad now that it's coming to an end, but i can't wait for the happy ending (at least i hope it's happy). Update soon please.

I just thought i'd post to take you up to 200. Yay!

Thanks for that bay girl! I just read them and they're great. No. Um, i mean the storyline isn't great it's sad. The writting is excellent though. Can't wait until you update.

Great chapter Nicole. God, Callum is an annoying little weasel, Isn't he?! Please post again soon.

How much more can Martha go through? Lol. Hope she's o.k, poor girl.

Physco Alert! Man Corey's an idiot. Can't wait to see how this hostage situation unfolds. Update soon.