Jamey-Maria

That's exactly what i was thinking lol. Awww this is really sweet so far. Good work! Please post again soon.

See Nicole!!! I told you Bay girl would be mad, lol.

O....MY......GOD!!!!!!! Nicole i'm shocked. This is amazing. You had me crying, no blubering. You fooled me and i think everyone else too. I have no idea how you made me happy and upset both at the same time. You did more than o.k covering the topic! You were brilliant. I absolutley loved it. You proved once again your amazing talent for writing, well done! Can't wait for the last chapter.

Martha? What on earth? Even though i already knew he was going to propose i'm still going awwwwwww, very sweet! Great chapter, please update soon.

Ha ha! Yay now your getting somewhere Jacky boy! Finally thet are realising it is Corey. Great chapter as usual, can't wait till you update.

Great chapter as usual, but i doubt you would care what i think seeing as you called me a LOSER! Update soon.

Nicole, you really know how to annoy someone don't you...lol. All i can say is my jaw hit the floor that entire time, i'm still realing. All i know is Martha would never cheat on Jack. Please update soon.

Nicole stop toying with us!

Ha, i knew i recognised the name (just finished Romeo and Juliet in English) Love it, love it, love it! Very different, i can't wait for the update. I always wondered what would have happened between Maddie and Ric!

I'm liking this fic! Please update soon.

Great chapter, please post again soon!

ooooooooo So good! I can't wait until you update! I don't think it's Jack's though. *sighs* Now that would be a good looking baby, lol!

Yay, love it already!!! Iv'e been waiting for this. Awww that's so sweet. I can't wait to start reading more of this fic! It sounds great. Please post A.S.A.P!!!

This fic is really getting exciting! I want to see Jack throttle Corey, that would be good! Please update soon, Jack needs to save Martha.

*gasp*O MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't believe it. Does Martha have a baby? oooooooo this is good! Sean you can do whatever with Serena just don't hurt Martha or the baby. You can't just leave it like that. I'm dying here, please update soon. Please, please, please.

Jack don't! You should trust your instincts, Callum is not trust worthy!!!! Great chapter!

I didn't think of that at first, but after reading your post i was lmao. I can imagine that too. Anyway that was fabulous Nicole. Can you get any better? Actually you probably can lol, what an explosive storyline (if my guesses are correct) Please update soon!!!

No Jack Martha is not o.k, go and save her NOW!!! Great chapter as always. Please update soon i'm desperate to find out what will happen!

Fantastic, just brilliant. I really enjoyed reading every chapter. Your a fabulous writer and i can't wait for the next fic. Wonder what it will be about *thinks*...................maybe J&M lol:p Anyway congratulations on the 60 pages!!!

Lucas if you tell Jack you'll ruin everything! As for Callum, man is he annoying! Great chapter, please update A.S.A.P!!!

I think i'm becoming addicted to this fan fic (no actually i already am) Great chapter, aww Irene was so sweet. Jack if you don't get your butt down there soon youe going to regret it!!! Please update A.S.A.P!!!

Arrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Go away Callum you........you........you pesky creep! Oh i was gritting my teeth reading that! You saved Jack's life now go, get lost. Such a good chapter, now i'm going to be thinking about this until you post lol, please update soon!

That was just the best chapter. Just when i think this fic couldn't get any better you surprise me again, well done. Serena's married to Jack huh, well we'll just see about that! By the way, noticed the use of neighbours characters lol!

30%!!!! Is that all the chance he has? Oh well, i'm not phased because i know he will pull through, he has too! Great chapter!

Now Nicole, while that was fabulous writing, you can't do this to me!!! You need to update A.S.A.P!!!! Jack the hero then turned into an unconcious man on the floor. So sweet how Martha gave him the power to fight back. Go Jack!