Jamey-Maria

Arrrrrrrrhhhhh *screams louder than ever before* Nicole i hit the computer screen, I ACTUALLY HIT IT! Do you have any idea how hard it is to type through clenched fists. I am going to mutilate Callum, totally and utterly mutilate him. I am going to run over him with a bloody lawn mower! He will be in little pieces and i can look on and laugh (i don't care how disturbing and sick that sounds) And Martha i don't hate you that much but i will give you a bloody good slap. How dumb can you get you STUPID GIRL!!! I would say go off with Callum as i don't care anymore but i won't because Callum won't be around..............

WOW! I was laughing my head off at the drunken rampage, i could just imagine them both drunk off their faces making out (because they've done it before lol) Yes dolly i really didn't think that had happened at the end of "some life for a princess hey?" Now if i can just stop laughing..........O.k YAY, wooohooo, Martha and Jack have a baby together, awww how adorable, they can be a little family!!! Just one slight problem, (i liked her before but i am going to go back to hating her) SERENA! The girl better step aside or i will shove her........ Great chapter Dolly, please update soon.

Nicole i think you have a mission on your hands, lol! Getting people to like Martha again, (in particular bay girl) how are you going to pull this one off?!?!

LOL, that's exactly what i was thinking!

Awww, that was funny, sad and frustrating! The first bit with Jack's sarcasm was really funny, but i hate HER!!! Poor Jack, and poor Martha, i really hope they can get past this. That was sweet how you described Lucas caring about Martha. I am now desperate to find out what Martha's secret is..........please update soon! *begs* Great chapter!

Noooo, Martha shut the door in his face!!!! He is a creep. Jack has a bad past?! Wow, never saw that one coming. Great chapter, please update soon.

Great chapter! Please update soon!

I don't like this David creep! What did Jack do? Why is this guy in town? And why is "Jacky boy" afraid of him? So many questions, lol! Please update soon! I'm glad your writting a new fic, can't wait to read what happens!

Who is this creep? Don't bother them, they are a happy family now! Please update soon.

LMAO!!!

God i hope the bombshell is what i think it is! Man i can't believe it, i actually like Serena (please don't shoot me as it all could change) i was shaking while i was reading the scenes about Dylan, i almost blubbered! The poor todler, i hope he is alright! Jack, get Sean, get him and beat him to a bloody pulp..lol! Great chapter Dolly, please update soon, i'm dying here!

All i can say is WOW!!! Definitley glad they are together:p

Callum is a creep, arrrrrrrrrrrrr. I didn't think it was possible to hate him anymore, but here i am reading this chapter getting mader!!!! Stuff Mia too, she might not have done anything wrong but she should have known what Martha was thinking while looking at her very undressed state. I'm raving now, but who the hell goes to answer the door wearing a bed sheet! What if it was Colleen? Then what would you do? I can't believe that when Martha finally decides to stop being a Moron this happens! You know what, i don't care, i can't believe she kissed Callum, she deserves to cry! Well done Nicole i am officially annoyed. I need to calm down before i can tell you anything nice. ********** O.K great chapter, please update soon!

Good start! Wonder what Jack did? Please update soon.

Count me in!

Maybe we can't turn back (that is the first one)

Yay two chapters for me to read!!! O.k where do i start? Oh yes with the first one.......GET YOUR FAUL HANDS OFF HER YOU PIG, NOW!!! (sorry needed to do that) Actually no, why am i apologising i am sure every other person reading this fic agrees! Secondly Nicole i was going to come at you through the screen while reading that scene with Martha and Callum and there oh so wrong display of affection *shudders* If that hadn't of been a nightmare then i would have seriously hurt you! lol. In any case i am sad now because Jack is upset and i'm seriously thinking that Martha is a total idiot!?!? Ohnestly running to Callum? HELLO, you have a best friend to do that with and her name is Tasha. Say it with me slowly T-A-S-H-A. Please update soon Nicole because if you don't i will go crazy. Please, please, please!!!! *begs*

Awww that is all i can say! How sweet. No actually i can say a lot more because Nicole seems to pass the "ramble" disease to everyone she talks to, lol! I loved the whole photo thing with the engraving! It seems that whenever you write a fan fic you update all the chapters very quickly, which on this side of the world is when i'm asleep, so i wake up to many chapters to read Makes me very happy!!! Seeing as i didn't get to post in the other chapters i will have to tell you what i thought of them all now. That was very nice how he let her stay over after everything, he is such a nice guy. I can't Martha was abused and she stayed with the guy !!! You did a great job covering that issue and why some women feel they can't leave. Well done! Martha wearing one of Jack's shirts made me laugh (i don't know why it just did lol) They still had feelings for each other (well i know your all saying duh because it wouldn't be a proper J&M fic if it wasn't) Now for the last bit: YAY!!!! *does happy dance* they are going to raise her baby and be a family, Jack will make an amazing dad! I loved the ending:) O.k i really hope you are writting more J&M fics because you are really good at them! I mean seriously if you are not i am going to have to come after you, lol...............I WILL!!!!

What Linzie said!

ooo I love it already, he is soo sweet putting his jacket around her! Just one question (because we've already established that i'm the not so bright one on this board) this doesn't continue on from your other fic does it? I guess it doesn't but i need to make sure. In any case. great chapter, can't wait for the update!

Me too, but it was because it is bloody freezing where i am, lol! No seriously Nicole i wanted a good fight scene but i'm glad you didn't! You kept Jack, and i quote "Summer Bay's most loved cop". You didn't make him stoop to Callum's level, well done. Awww the Beth scenes were so sweet, she is so nice! Please update soon.

Everything Nicole said. That was soo disgusting!!! I'm really hoping that this fic doesn't end with Corey going to jail. I'm hoping it ends with Jack shooting the......... every bad word i can think of. Poor Martha, i was almoast crying when i read what she was going through. That sick, faul excuse for a man!!! This is getting so intense, you have to update like now because i am going to seriously die waiting!

Mason's a freak ain't he?!?! Watching them, now that is just gross! This fic has got me hooked, please update soon!

I am sad that they have broken up but after reading that i want do a happy dance! Punch him Jack, punch him! Show him how fit you are lol, i will cheer you on! I can't wait to read the next chapter and Nicole i really hope you give me the satisfaction of Jack really giving to Callum! I'm not a violent person but this has to be done! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!

Nicole i am crying! I'm finding it quite hard to type because i can't see the keys, lol. That was so beuatiful and so wonderfully written that i'm glad you did it the way you did! Yes it was sad but it wouldn't have been so effective any other way. I'm totally blubering now, i'v read so many sad fics today and the ep of hna i juat watched made me emotional too! When i realised that Martha was gone and Jack had Matt my heart sank, it's really nice how he has a their son to raise and that he looks like Martha! I'm going to go and cry somemore lol, WELL DONE!!!