Jamey-Maria

Finally Martha realises, BUT IT'S A LITTLE TOO LATE, don't you think? Please Nicole, how many chapters are you going to have Jack in pain? Callum for somone who was supposed to be a freak and a stalker (and a damn good one!) you sure let your self go in the end, you were very carless with the knife. Tsk, tsk, tsk dumbass!!!! Anyway i'm hoping for a little blood drawn from Martha, i need her to suffer just a little before i can completley forgive her, it's only fair:P Great chapter Nicole, please update soon!!!

Love the quotes in the last paragraph but that's about it. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU did that to us. "I love you Serena," "I love you Jack" *Says in mock tone* That made me want to throw up!!!! Then you sent him to prison, PRISON?!?! How is this supposed to get better? I'll probably die, if the next part of the sequel doesn't come up soon. I must say it was written extremley well though! I'm just going to go away and cry now...........

Nicole, i am so mad at you!!!! You can't leave it there? I have tears in my eyes, reading the bit about Jack on the phone! I don't know whether that is from lack of sleep or not. How could Jack make his last phone call to Martha instead of the ambulance?!?! Sweet but insane. So if Peter showed up does that mean that Martha actually listened, got the message and called? God i hope this is coming to an end (not only for J&M but for you) I'd hate think what i might do to you if you keep this up! Please update soon, otherwise i will be in pain thinking about Jack. EDIT: If you kill him you betta have an escape plan!!!!!

OMG. OMG, OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!:O:O You know what? I hope she killed him!!! I can't believe that happened though! Martha is such a smartass but very, very clever! That was such a great chapter that i can't even write as much as usual, too shocked. Amazing, please update soon!

For god's sake Martha shut up for two seconds..........two seconds, seriously that's all it would have taken! O.k now that Martha is over there maybe he can get through to her. Great chapter, please update soon!

I have quite a bit to say. No Callum you have no right to call Martha babe, and i may be annoyed with her at the moment but she is NOT going to sleep with you!!! (i still have respect for her in that sense) How could Jack be that thicke? Ohnestly if Callum had been stalking them for months, telling Martha lies and whatever else he did just to get her for himself as if he is going to give up that easily. O.k now, Nicole you said not dead at the end of the chapter. Well he could be in pain for the whole next chapter and the ones after it, that's just as cruel!! God if he suffers for long i will kill Callum! Great chapter, please update soon.

Awww that was soo good. Very sweet and very romantic! I always love your fan fic's but i hate when they end! Very well written and i hope you have another in the works!

Martha what are you doing? It's not Jack's fault, please forgive him........... you you want to . Anyway great chapter, please update soon!

Go Lukey boy, fix everything......Please update soon!

Wow just caught up on all those chapters, what an awesome fic! You did an excellent job, and i loved all the suspence, i could never guess what was going to happen next! Very gald Peter is alive. Yay Jack and Martha got married and it sounded beautiful AND you killed Macca! (you have no idea how happy that last bit makes me)WOOOHOOO! Now if the writers would only take some tips from you............

Yay the deranged Physco is gone, fantastic! But Martha can't seriously be mad at Jack, it wasn't his fault......... Great chapter, please update soon!

Thanks for telling us. Have a nice time!

Thanks Linzie, now i'm going to be stressing about that untill Nicole updates...GREAT! I'm starting to thonk that Jack is a bloody saint! I can't believe he's going to go through all this again for an idiot that doesn't belive him. Great chapter Nicole, but you need to update soon!

Awww poor Sally, how sad is this!!! Please update soon, great chapter.

Damn, Nicole you beat me to it. I was going to quote those! Anyway, that was a great chapter, awww poor Martha, i hope Jack can talk to her soon as this is really starting to upset me! Please update soon, because i NEED to no Martha's secret!!!

What on earth?! Jack can't go to jail, he PUTS people in jail! This is so completley wrong, i can't believe this is happening. You need to update soon and Jack needs to be cleared otherwise..............*shudders*

O.K Lukey boy now we are getting somewhere! You hurry up and figure out what Lauren has done and get them back together! Do it fast though, otherwise that Lauren witch will probably do something else........... Great chapter, please update soon!

OMG, i just read 6&7 and they were fabulous! I can't belive that he was Harry's other child...wow, didn't see that one coming! I'm so glad that Jack was there to save Martha but i didn't want her to leave. I reckon the two of them could've taken him on, lol! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!

I'll just use what XS-I-A-NX said, everything i wanted to say

O yes she would!!! Nicole sends me little snippets from her chapters to tease me and they are really cruel! Anyway i don't need to go into how much i hate Callum but i will say that i actually was starting to take my disliking for Martha down a notch..............until she considered it. I didn't get mad because Nicole i don't have it in me anymore, but i was dissapointed! And then when i didn't think it could possibly get any worse you go and do that!? Please update soon even though i'm betting i won't like the outcome.

AWW AWW AWWWWW!!!!!!!! That was so sad, but sweet at the same time. Jack loves Martha, and Martha loves Jack.............and if Corey doesn't flippin let her go soon i'll go crazy! It seems like half the town is outside lol. You seriously need to update soon, REALLY SOON!

Why, Dolly, why would you do this?! Jack what have you done? How did this happen? Noooooo, i think i'm going to cry, no i'm o.k it was only Sean....pffft! But Jack.....God no! Please update soon!

Bloody hell Martha, would it have killed you to shut up for a minute and listen!? Geez...... Why do i have a feeling i'm going to be cheering for Lucas and that he's going to be the hero!? (not just yet though) Great chapter, please update soon!

OMG, why the hell did you end it there?! That was so mean. David is a total creep and if he doesn't back off, i'm going to "lovley" his face up with a cricket bat!!! Poor Martha, for heavens sake Jack where are you? Great chapter, please, please, please update soon!

Aww poor Rach, not Irene too! Great chapter, please update soon!