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Nooooo, not Martha, Leon's a jerk, wait no that's an insult to Jerks. Let me guess and now while Jack's flurting with Laurie, Martha's going to get raped and trust even less than she already did for the rest of her life, so basically it's Lauries fault cause if she wasn't there then Jack and Martha wouldn't be 'taking a break' and Martha wouldn't of been out on the balcony and there for Leon wouldn't of even talked to her at all. Anyway I'll stop rambling, very well written Rach, can't wait to read what happens next.

, please don't let either Jack or Martha try to make the other one jealous.

aww . Stupid Tash, why'd she have to walk in right when they were finally talking to eachother. He better be wishing that Martha would trust him, hopefully they'll both realise soon that they're ment to be together. Loving this fic Rach, hope to read more soon. Your doing an awsome job.

LOL! busted. Finally cought up, this is awsome, glad there finally together. More soon please.

What they said, loving this fic, and loving your writting. More soon please.

Just finnished reading the whole thing. I'm loving it Rach, it's awsome. Jack's so adorable how he's so protective over Martha. And I love how they tease each other. You've done an excelent job with the dialogue. More soon.

Awsome last two chapters, you've done a brilliant job with this fic, you should be very proud of yourself, well done, *claps*. Loved the J&Mness as usual, and the proposal was brilliant, sad were not going to see the wedding though. Good job.

I don't know what else to say, that was beautiful the way Jack was looking out for Martha. Good job. Can't wait for more.

Yay, Hugh's in a coma. *dances* I hope he stays that way. loved the J&Mness in that chapter, jacks such a sweetie isn't he? More soon. Glad Martha's alright.

I know this might sound horrible, but I don't really care if Hugh makes it or not, . Loving how caring Jack is, , at least now he knows how much he loves Martha. More soon please, loving this fic.

Sadly I agree, I doubt he'd just move on just from sleeping with her, it would be nice if he did. Poor Martha, she'd be devistated if he regected her. Beautiful chapter, well done as usual. Can't wait for more.

Awsome chapter, very well written, I loved the way you discribed things, particularly in the first half, it was very well done, you should be proud of yourself. Loved the JM interaction. More soon please.