Lauz

Yes, yes she does. After she accepts Tracey is dead she looks around at the barn. The flames are getting higher and in a few minutes the whole place will be burnt to shreads. Zoe could have escaped if she wanted to... but she doesn't. She has no reason to live on. The women she loved is dead, and it was her fault. She lies back down choking on the thick smoke and holds Tracey in her arms. *sniff* I think that last sentence is actually in my fic LOL. But yes, sad ending but cute

Ohhh god... how am I gonna tell you this. They kinda die... ummm... how they did on the show I'm sorry but it won't be as crap. It's gonna be one of those teary endings. I'll try and describe the ending... Zoe and Tracey will be lying there after the explosion. Zoe sits up and sees Tracey and begins to shake her on the shoulder. Tracey doesn't move. Zoe starts to laugh and says to Tracey that this joke isn't funny but still no movement. Zoe rolls her over and sees that she is dead. She begins to cry and begs her to wake up. She tells her she can't be dead because she loves her, more than see ever loved Sarah and that she is sorry she dragged her into this. Etc....... I'll write it out properly but basically Zoe stays with Tracey because she doesn't have the will to go on Sad... So it'll be like that but once I word it out properly it'll be at least 10 times as sad

Well some people just act nice for no reason, but I didn't think you were joking Thanks very much, because before posting a fic I'd wanna make sure it doesn't suck BTW just letting you guys know I'm dedicating it to two very special people... any guesses??? Okay it's too obvious HAHA. And Andy maybe you could make sure it doesn't suck to

*cue thinking music* Good idea I'll back that one up!!! As long as Tracey and Zoe don't die I'm all good. Shame they die in my fic... sorry to ruin it but it's how it has to be

Oh my god... I musn't have been paying attention... I thought you meant an actual cat Note to self: READ VERY CAREFULLY SO YOU DON'T MISS JOKES ABOUT TRACEY'S...

You say flips out like she's not already insane Ahhh, joking! Explosions are good, but remember the number one rule here... NO FREAKIN CAKES! Sorry, but I couldn't handle it LOL.

More psychotic!!! I can't wait I'm trying to imagine more psychotic... two rabbits??? I know you'll think of something great!

Dear god!!! Poor Laura... I was screamish at all though, it's just funny in a highly disturbing way Actually, poor microwave... who's gonna clean up the mess Well they better before they eat out of it again, unless they like the imploded rabbit seasoning LOL. Anyway, AWESOME FIC!!! It's very dark... I love it

Really??? So you would honestly be happy to read over what I've written so far??? Rabsey I'd really appreciate that! And you have to be honest, if it sucks I can handle it I'll try and give you it tomorrow, and thanks

It's taken me like 3 days to write the intro... and I've decided to start again I've got all the ideas but I'm **** at writing them down. Anyway, back to you Rabsey. Seriously, you should be proud of everything you've written. I can honestly say I've read all of your fics at least 3 times and loved all of them I'm the official Rabsey and Andy cheer squad!!! So if I combine to two together it's like... Team Rabsandy!!!

LOL I was pissing myself at that remark!!! Like, Peter's about to die so let's boost his confidence by saying we ****ed in his bed twice

LOL wanna get pizza... ****ING BRILLIANT!!! This is one of the best stories I've EVER read If we were reading this stuff in english I would actually pay attention Rabsey, you are truly awesome, and that's coming from the heart I love it when they pashed!!! ... take that back... Anyway, amazing story as always

It was freezing all day, and then it was raining.

LOL I think it's fair to say we all laughed at the expense of the poor pet Zoe has driven us insane!!! HAHA, my dog and cat are in the room and are looking at me... *it's okay guys, I won't light you on fire LOL*

Nice idea with the whole "I'm insane so let's kill some poor defenceless animal" Good luck with making Tracey really evil

Andy that was AWESOME... IN CAPITAL LETTERS!!! Tracey and Zoe are soooooo cute Ohhh a pet??? Knowing Zoe it'll be something really big and evil... like... a mountain lion!!! ROAR!!!

Sorry it took so long for me too comment!!! Wow, this is really getting involved. Part 12 was especially dark and intriguing Rachel has gone through so much **** Either way fantastic effort here!!! Please update soon

I read this before but I had no idea you posted it here already LOL. Seriously it was amazing!!! This is a great fic for showing the relationship between Zoe and Tracey I'm just written the intro to mine, I'm having some trouble now LOL. I might post the start tomorrow. Anyway I hope you update it soon!!!

It's bloody boiling over here. I'm not if that's because the weather is hot or because my heating is too high LOL

Great work!!! Can't wait for you to update it, but yes you should take a break

My damn internet stuffed up yesterday and I didn't get to read Part 7 But I read it just then GREAT!!! The suspense just keeps building and building! And yes I like the name Emily, but of course I'd say that LOL. Hope you update it soon

I have realized something very important... YOU CAN'T WRITE ANYTHING THAT ISN'T AWESOME!!! That was hilarious. When I say LOL I mean it

Thanks for updating it!!! I was getting worried you wouldn't LOL. The story's getting really involved now, you just keep and adding and adding to the suspense Mystery women eh??? *cue creepy music* Guess we shall find out who it is later Great work!!!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OMG SO GOOD!!! That was amazing!!! I'm gonna have to read it again and again I'm so glad you didn't kill off Zoe and Tracey, that would've been awful I'm so happy you've finished it but so sad it's over LOL. But really that was fantastic, it's brightned up my week. Hopefully you'll write more in the future

OMFG!!! It's here!!! I think I'm gonna pass out Thanks so much for the amazing story luckyrabbit I haven't read it yet but I'm going to right now. I don't care what homework I'm doing, I'm reading this!!! Dedicated... to us??? Awwwww, that's so sweet of you! Thanks so much I'll have to post my half-finished one and dedicate it back to you LOL. Okay, time to read... BTW Memoirs Of A Cake Girl is fantastic