TelephotoMarigold

Oh my god... oh my god....oh my god!!! Eeek!!!!!!!!! Tele

I liked it.... keep going! Tele x

I would.... Tele x

Hey! Good start! Love to read more Tele x

Hey Nice start! looking forward to more....! Tele xx

Hey! Cool start..... Freya wearing Ruby's old clothes??? Good image. Update soon... Tele x

Is that better??

Me too.... and I'm writing it!!!

Hey, I really like this!! I like the way you have interwoven the song into the story. And involved the other characters even though the story is seen through Geoff's pov. Good use of language too!! Well done! Love Tele xx

Blushes..... Takes a bow..... Thank you No 1 Fan ..... x

Just read you Fic and it is awsome.... I want to see updates.....[/font] NOW.... Love Tele xx

Hey, interesting start... keep going!!

I read your comment and had a sudden vision of Roman in a tuxedo drinking a martini.... gave me a whole new train of thought for a minute and I nearly lost a page of dialogue... If anyone needs me I'll just be in a cold shower I'm feeling a little shaken... and perhaps stirred!!!

Thank you all!!! Do you think I could get a job as awriter on the show?? Where do I send my application??? :cool: By the way... the next bit is sad so have hankies at the ready....

Gee Shucks.... Thanks!!! I could tell you but that would spoil the plot.... you could twist my arm though and I accept bribes......

Hey.... I'm typing my fingers to the bone here ..... and I think I broke a nail!! Will be updated tonight!! Love Tele x

He's a big tough army guy.... he can handle it!! Tele X

Gee Shucks... Thanks guys.... Does that mean you would like another chapter today?? Just kidding I'll be updating tonight ..... and your appreciation is very much.... appreciated!! Tele xx

Cool! Thank you!

To quote Alf.... Muhwahwaha

Thank you Perhaps you should print it off and hand it to him to read ...with the words "hint hint" written on the top..... Tele x

Thanks Quiet Achiever!! Here is Chaper 2 - no revisions.....

of course not..... new chapter up tomorrow... well later today....

Thanks! That means a lot! I re-read it after I finished it and knew there were bits I wanted to re-write..... I had the other version moved to the Vault so if you still want to read it you can... although if you wait I should have it all reposted soon.... ... I think I'm addicted to Fan fiction <sigh> Love Tele x

Good Grief you don't want much do you? I'll see what I can come up with tomight..... I have just the scene in my head.... one word... "Bicepticles"...