Jackieleanne

Thanks Penny hopefully more will be updated tonight although I want to try and get both family life and new beginning updated aswell.

Up to you but I wouldn't complain.

Dramatic that sounds good can't wait to see what happens.

Brillinat chapter Tash, I really have no clue whos going to die I keep changing my mind.

I agree its a shame that it isn't shown as much because I really liked watching them together.

That was great I loved it, can't wait to see what happens I hope Diesel doesn't try to spoil things.

Great work Muse, I really liked it loved the Kit/Noah pairing.

Awww squeal I loved it, and poor Lucas being teased by Matilda when they have to wait. Can't wait to read more.

Great work and nice quick and long updates I love it. Glad that Mattie and the babies are ok, and glad that they have decided to come clean about their feelings. Can't wait to see what happens.

Awww glad Henry is compatable but also so scared for the two of them I really don't know who it is going to be. Brilliant writing yet again really captures the emotions.

Brilliant work Jess I love it can't wait to read more.

Brilliant I completly loved it can't wait to read more.

Great chapter I will be eagerly awaiting what Henry's decision is going to be. Can't wait to read more.

Thats good can't wait to see what happens.

Squeal a new story from you and another Lucas and Matilda one, is this a few chapter short story or just the one shot. Either way I loved it especially loved Jack and Lucas talk great writing.

Awww beautifully written I can't wait to see what happens and now I am totally confused about who is going to be the one who won't make it I don't want it to be any of them. Great work.

Awww that was absolutely brilliant I totally loved it. I still have no idea who it is who won't make it. Can't wait to read more.

Awww seriously im holding back the tears that was so sad, I agree with everything Jess said that was so brilliantly written you captured the emotions perfectly and I absolutely adored Matilda and Henry. Great work.

Thanks It's 1:30am I just got home from work so the next update should be tommorow now.

Hey Amir, I loved Pirates of the Carribean 2 I really enjoyed it, I thought it was really funny at times.

Awww so sad I seriously have tears in my eyes im all emotional that was brilliant I really hope it isn't Matilda that is going to die not that I want any of them too. Can't wait to read more.

Awww a beautifully writen and emotional chapter poor Jack, great writting.

That's good I don't know how much longer I can wait, I love this story so much and I want to know whose died.

Thanks for your great and lengthy feedback Kase I'm glad you liked it.

Awww that was a beautiful chapter poor Jack.